Emails— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often send emails?
受験者
Actually, I shared send emails because as a student we do not need to send emails to communication with our teachers. We usually use the WeChat. It's very convenient to communication with each other or chat with friends.
試験官
When would you send emails to others?
受験者
Uh, maybe, uh, at the Daylight Time between 9:00 AM to 5:00 PM, uh, we need send emails for, for more purpose like applying for internships and I think it's good for us.
試験官
Is sending emails popular in China?
受験者
Yes, in my memory I think emails popular in China because a lot of worker need to send emails communication with colleges about work related matters or send emails for their internships and some work.
試験官
Do you think sending emails will be more or less popular in the future?
受験者
Uh, I think emails will be more popular in the future. In my opinion, I think e-mail was a communication without, uh, some, uh, limited. We can send emails with different country people and different, uh, connect.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often send emails?
スコア: 55.0提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“shared send emails”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用更准确的词汇表达。
例: No, I don't often send emails because as a student, I usually communicate with my teachers and friends through WeChat, which is more convenient.
When would you send emails to others?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有较多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明发送邮件的时间和目的。
例: I usually send emails during working hours, from 9 AM to 5 PM, especially when applying for internships or official purposes.
Is sending emails popular in China?
スコア: 58.0提案: 回答语法不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明邮件的流行原因，并提供具体例子。
例: Yes, sending emails is popular in China because many workers use emails to communicate with colleagues about work-related matters and internships.
Do you think sending emails will be more or less popular in the future?
スコア: 57.0提案: 回答中有多处语气词，且表达不够清晰。建议减少填充词，使用更准确的表达，说明邮件未来流行的原因。
例: I believe emails will become more popular in the future because they allow us to communicate easily with people from different countries without many limitations.
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