Art— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达“我不擅长”和“很难画好看”的意思。可以简洁明了地表达自己的观点，并适当补充原因。

例: No, I don't enjoy drawing because I find it difficult to create pictures that look good. However, I appreciate other forms of art like photography.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“before”用法不当，“doctors”应为“drawings”或“artworks”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性，避免无关内容。

例: Yes, I enjoy visiting art galleries because they provide a peaceful environment. For example, I like to look at paintings that help me relax and inspire creativity.

提案: 回答中“ads”用词错误，应为“arts”。句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达愿望，并补充具体理由。

例: Yes, I want to learn more about art, especially music. For instance, I would love to learn how to play the piano and guitar because they help me express my emotions and enjoy music more deeply.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“draw one with kids”和“exploring Asia”。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并使用正确表达。

例: No, I didn't learn drawing as a child because I preferred playing games and spending time outdoors rather than doing indoor activities like drawing.

× I enjoy going to art galleries before they offer a peaceful environment.

✓ I enjoy going to art galleries because they offer a peaceful environment.

句中使用了错误的连词“before”，应使用“because”表示原因。

× Well, I can appreciate different type of at work.

✓ Well, I can appreciate different types of artwork.

“type”应使用复数形式“types”，且“at work”应改为“artwork”表示艺术品。

× For example, I like to appreciate doctors and paintings which can help me relax.

✓ For example, I like to appreciate paintings which can help me relax.

“doctors”与上下文不符，应去掉。

× Yes, I definitely want to learn more about the ads, especially the music.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to learn more about the arts, especially the music.

“ads”应为“arts”，表示艺术。

× For example, I would love to learn how to play the pianos and guitar, which is my favorite music instrument.

✓ For example, I would love to learn how to play the piano and guitar, which are my favorite musical instruments.

“pianos”应为单数“piano”，且“guitar”与“piano”并列，谓语应为复数“are”，且“music instrument”应为复数“musical instruments”。

× Learn this instrument would help me to express my emotion and enjoy music deeply.

✓ Learning these instruments would help me express my emotions and enjoy music more deeply.

动名词形式“Learning”更合适，且“instrument”应为复数“instruments”，动词“express”后不需要“to”，“emotion”应为复数“emotions”，副词“more deeply”更自然。

× No, I never learned how to draw one with kids because I prefer to play all the games.

✓ No, I never learned how to draw when I was a kid because I preferred to play all the games.

“one with kids”表达不清，应改为“when I was a kid”，且时态应保持一致，过去时“preferred”。

× I spend most of my time to exploring Asia and run around rather than do some indoor activities like drawing.

✓ I spent most of my time exploring outside and running around rather than doing indoor activities like drawing.

“spend time”后应接动名词形式，“exploring Asia”不合适，改为“exploring outside”，且“run”应改为“running”，保持形式一致。