Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时句子结构有些不完整，且部分表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意语法准确性。

例: I have a talent for drawing, which I started when I was about five years old. People around me often say I have a natural ability, and I enjoy it a lot. Because of my passion, I have practiced regularly and improved my skills over time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并注意句子完整性。

例: I began drawing at a young age, but I really improved my skills during high school. I studied drawing systematically to prepare for exams, which helped me a lot. Since then, I have practiced regularly and become more confident.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免句子不完整或含糊。

例: Yes, my drawing skills are very useful for my future career. Although I major in art and design management, being able to draw helps me communicate ideas clearly with designers and clients. It also helps me understand the creative process better and manage projects more effectively.

提案: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇，避免模糊表达，并注意句子连贯性。

例: Most of my family members are talented in science, as they studied physics and mathematics. However, my mother is also good at drawing. After I started drawing as a hobby, she became interested and practiced a lot, and now she is quite skilled.

× since then my people around me have told me that I have a natural talent in this area.

✓ since then the people around me have told me that I have a natural talent in this area.

“my people around me”中的“my”使用不当，应该用定冠词“the”来指代特定的人群。

× So I believe is quite clear that drawing is something I really good at.

✓ So I believe it is quite clear that drawing is something I am really good at.

句中缺少主语“it”，且“I really good at”缺少动词“am”，导致句子不完整。

× At that time, I began to study a specific drawing in system to prepare for my exams, which helped me improve my skill significantly, and since then I have practiced regularly and gained more confidence in my.

✓ At that time, I began to study a specific drawing system to prepare for my exams, which helped me improve my skills significantly, and since then I have practiced regularly and gained more confidence in myself.

“drawing in system”应为“drawing system”，且“skill”应为复数“skills”，最后“confidence in my”缺少宾语，应为“confidence in myself”。

× This skill allows me to better understand the creative process and manage project more if it effectively.

✓ This skill allows me to better understand the creative process and manage projects more effectively.

“manage project more if it effectively”结构混乱，应改为“manage projects more effectively”，使句子通顺且语法正确。

× Most of my family members have talents related to science because the OR majored in physics and mathematics, so our skills are quite different from artistic talents.

✓ Most of my family members have talents related to science because they majored in physics and mathematics, so our skills are quite different from artistic talents.

“the OR”应为“they”，指代前文的“family members”，使用错误的代词导致句意不明。

× After I started drawing as a hobby, she also become interested and practiced a lot, and she's quite good at it.

✓ After I started drawing as a hobby, she also became interested and practiced a lot, and she's quite good at it.

“she also become interested”中的“become”应为过去式“became”，与句子时态保持一致。