Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์มาก ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

例: I think my talent is being a good team player because I enjoy supporting others. It makes me feel happy and relaxed when I help my teammates.

提案: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีความสับสนในการสื่อสาร ควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยบอกช่วงเวลาที่เริ่มมีทักษะนั้น พร้อมใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงความคิด

例: I have had this talent since I was young, starting in elementary school when I joined the color team and cheered for sports like basketball and football.

提案: คำตอบมีความชัดเจนแต่ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้ประโยคเชื่อมโยงเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

例: I don't think my talent will be useful for my future career because I want to be a doctor. Being a doctor requires hard work and little free time, so sports may not fit well with my career.

提案: คำตอบมีความพยายามแต่ยังไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนว่าคนในครอบครัวมีทักษะเดียวกันอย่างไร พร้อมใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงความคิด

例: Yes, I think some of my family members have the same talent. For example, my mom was a volleyball player in high school, and my dad enjoys playing football with his friends.

× That's why it's a good question.

✓ That's why it's a good question.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not contain errors from the provided list.

× So I think I'm not there stood out person.

✓ So I think I'm not a standout person.

The phrase 'there stood out person' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a standout person' to describe someone who stands out. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue.

× Bad.

✓ (Remove this fragment as it is incomplete and unclear.)

The word 'Bad.' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be removed or expanded to clarify meaning.

× Also I think I'm good as part because I love to praying them but I provide him.

✓ Also, I think I'm good at sports because I love playing them, and I support him.

The phrase 'good as part' should be 'good at sports' (preposition error). 'Love to praying' should be 'love playing' (verb form). 'Provide him' is unclear; likely intended 'support him'.

× They made me feel joy able and relax.

✓ They make me feel joyful and relaxed.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect adjective forms. 'Made' should be 'make' to match present tense. 'Joy able' is incorrect; correct adjective is 'joyful'. 'Relax' should be 'relaxed'.

× 2.

✓ (Remove this as it is unclear and unrelated.)

The number '2.' is out of context and should be removed.

× So I think I'm good as person.

✓ So I think I'm a good person.

Missing article 'a' before 'good person' is an article error and sentence structure issue.

× I was a young like when I was in the elementary school.

✓ I was young when I was in elementary school.

'A young' is incorrect; 'young' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. Also, 'the elementary school' should be 'elementary school' without 'the'.

× They have a color spa day, so.

✓ They had a color spirit day, so...

'Color spa day' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'color spirit day' is more appropriate. Also, tense should be past 'had' to match 'when I was young'.

× They going to sample a student in the color team and cheer some student to be a prayer to pray spot like learning basketball or football.

✓ They selected students for the color team and cheered for students in sports like basketball or football.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Going to sample a student' is incorrect; 'selected students' is better. 'Cheer some student to be a prayer to pray spot' is unclear; likely intended 'cheered for students in sports'.

× Of I don't think so, because I want to be a doctor after I graduated from university.

✓ No, I don't think so, because I want to be a doctor after I graduate from university.

'Of' is incorrect; should be 'No'. 'After I graduated' should be 'after I graduate' to indicate future event.

× So you know, doctor is a hard working.

✓ So you know, being a doctor requires hard work.

'Doctor is a hard working' is incorrect. 'Hard working' is an adjective describing a person, not a noun. The sentence should express that being a doctor requires hard work.

× We don't have much time to do anything else.

✓ We don't have much time to do anything else.

This sentence is correct and does not contain errors.

× I think spot is not match with my future callier.

✓ I think sports do not match my future career.

'Spot' should be 'sports' (plural noun). 'Is not match' is incorrect; correct is 'do not match'. 'Callier' is a misspelling of 'career'.

× Yes, I think my pal and have their same talent as me.

✓ Yes, I think my family members have the same talent as me.

'My pal and have their same talent' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended 'my family members have the same talent'.

× Like my mom ever told me that she when she was in high school she is a volleyball player and now my dad is there soldier but he loved to play football with his friends so much so I think that I got this.

✓ My mom told me that when she was in high school, she was a volleyball player, and now my dad is a soldier, but he loves to play football with his friends. So I think I got this talent from them.

Tense inconsistency: 'she is a volleyball player' should be 'she was a volleyball player' to match past time. 'There soldier' should be 'a soldier'. 'Loved to play' should be 'loves to play' for present habit. Sentence structure improved for clarity.