Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and more natural phrasing. For example, say "I have a talent for art" instead of "Art is one of my talent." Also, avoid repeating the word "art" unnecessarily.

例: Yes, I have a talent for art and I really enjoy drawing and painting.

提案: Use clearer and grammatically correct sentences. Instead of "I started at from three years old to nine years old," say "I started learning art when I was three years old and continued until I was nine."

例: I started learning art when I was three years old and continued practicing until I was nine.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. For example, "I want to be a designer in the future because my talent in art will help me create beautiful designs."

例: I want to be a designer in the future because my talent in art will help me create beautiful and creative designs.

提案: Clarify your answer and use correct vocabulary. Instead of "has the team," say "has the same talent." Also, provide a bit more detail if possible.

例: Yes, my father has the same talent for art, and he enjoys painting as well.

× Art is one of my talent.

✓ Art is one of my talents.

The word 'talent' should be plural 'talents' because it is preceded by 'one of my', which requires a plural noun to indicate one item from a group.

× Yeah, I started at from three years old to nine years old.

✓ Yeah, I started from three years old to nine years old.

The phrase 'at from' is incorrect; only 'from' is needed to indicate the starting point of the age range. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; it is better to say 'I started when I was three years old and continued until I was nine years old.' However, per instructions, only correcting grammar mistakes listed.

× I tell me to be a designer in my future and I can be artist and things like that.

✓ I want to be a designer in my future and I can be an artist and things like that.

The phrase 'I tell me to be' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I want to be' to express desire. Also, 'be artist' needs the article 'an' before 'artist' because 'artist' is a singular countable noun starting with a vowel sound.

× Yeah, my father has the team at the same time.

✓ Yeah, my father has the talent at the same time.

The word 'team' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'talent'. 'Talent' is singular and fits the context of having the same ability.