Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。例えば、接続詞を適切に使い、文を短く区切ることが重要です。

例: Yes, I am good at writing. Since I was a child, I enjoyed writing stories and non-fiction, which are precious memories for me. Currently, I work as a journalist and write many articles.

提案: 多くのためらいや繰り返しがあり、文の構造も不明瞭です。話す際は自信を持ち、簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。また、時制や冠詞の使い方にも注意が必要です。

例: I mastered this skill when I was in high school. At that time, there was a boom in writing summer novels and blogs on the Internet, and I enjoyed participating because I like writing.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。特に主語と動詞の一致、単数・複数形の使い分けに注意し、論理的に話を展開する練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I believe my talent is useful for my future work because writing is a complex skill. Although artificial intelligence can write, creating attractive stories is still difficult, and I want to improve in this area.

提案: 多くの「uh」や「umm」が含まれており、話の流れが途切れています。話す前に考えを整理し、簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。また、具体例を述べる際は文法に注意してください。

例: No, I don't think anyone in my family has the same talent. For example, my father does not like writing at all, whether it's bills, blogs, or even emails.

× one of the important skills for me is writing something

✓ one of the important skills for me is writing

The phrase 'writing something' is awkward and unnecessary here. 'Writing' as a skill is uncountable and does not need 'something'. Removing 'something' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× some non fictions

✓ some non-fiction works

The term 'non fictions' is incorrect because 'non-fiction' is an uncountable noun or an adjective. To refer to multiple works, 'non-fiction works' or 'non-fiction stories' is appropriate.

× there were a boom of writing a summer novels and a blogs on the Internet

✓ there was a boom of writing summer novels and blogs on the Internet

The phrase 'there were a boom' is incorrect because 'boom' is singular and requires 'was'. Also, 'a summer novels' and 'a blogs' are incorrect plural forms with singular articles. Removing 'a' before plural nouns corrects the sentence.

× the stories is a very difficult

✓ the stories are very difficult

The subject 'stories' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'a very difficult' is incorrect because 'difficult' is an adjective and needs a noun or should be used without 'a'.

× all of my family members don't like, uh, writing something

✓ all of my family members don't like writing

The phrase 'writing something' is awkward and unnecessary. 'Writing' as an activity does not need 'something' here. Removing 'something' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× doesn't like, uh, any writing skills

✓ doesn't like, uh, any writing

'Writing skills' refers to abilities, but the context suggests dislike of the activity of writing. Therefore, 'any writing' is more appropriate than 'any writing skills'.

× for example, no bills or blogs and uh, even emails

✓ for example, no bills or blogs, and even emails

The phrase 'no bills or blogs' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misuse. Possibly intended 'no blogs or emails'. Also, adding commas improves clarity.