Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda 'a talent on art' ifadesi yerine 'a talent for art' kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz daha doğal ve akıcı olabilir. Örneğin, 'I have had a talent for art since I was a little kid' şeklinde ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: I have had a talent for art since I was a little kid, and I have always enjoyed drawing and painting.

提案: Cümlenizde 'It was mastered when I was young' ifadesi biraz garip ve doğal değil. Daha doğal bir ifade kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, 'I have a talent' yerine 'I had a talent' daha uygun olur. Bağlaç kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

例: I mastered it when I was young because I used to paint all day, so my parents noticed that I had a talent for art.

提案: Cümlenizde 'in nowadays' ifadesi yanlış kullanılmış, doğru ifade 'nowadays' olmalı. Ayrıca, ifadeniz çok olumsuz ve genelleyici. Daha dengeli ve açıklayıcı bir cevap vermeniz faydalı olur. Bağlaçlar kullanarak nedenlerinizi açıklayabilirsiniz.

例: I don't think my talent will be useful for my future work because nowadays, art is often undervalued in many professions, although it can still be important in creative fields.

提案: Cümlenizde 'she's arts is not good as mine' ifadesi dilbilgisi açısından yanlış. Doğru ifade 'her art is not as good as mine' olmalı. Ayrıca, cümlenizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

例: I don't think anyone in my family has the same talent, but my mom used to paint; however, her art is not as good as mine.

× I have a talent on art since when I was a little kid.

✓ I have a talent for art since I was a little kid.

The correct preposition to use with 'talent' is 'for', not 'on'. Also, 'since when' is incorrect; it should be 'since'.

× It was mastered when I was young.

✓ I mastered it when I was young.

The phrase 'was mastered' is passive and awkward here. The student should use active past tense 'I mastered it' to indicate they learned the skill.

× my parents saw that I have a talent for art.

✓ my parents saw that I had a talent for art.

Since the main verb 'saw' is in the past tense, the subordinate clause should also be in the past tense ('had') to maintain tense consistency.

× art has no meaning or worth in nowadays.

✓ art has no meaning or worth nowadays.

The phrase 'in nowadays' is incorrect. 'Nowadays' is an adverb and should be used without 'in'.

× she's arts is not good as mine.

✓ her art is not as good as mine.

'Arts' is incorrect here; the singular 'art' should be used. Also, 'she's' (she is) should be replaced with 'her' to correctly modify 'art'. The phrase 'not good as' should be 'not as good as' for correct comparison.