Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且直接回答问题。

例: Yes, I am good at reading people's expressions. For example, when I play the game 'Avatar' with my friends, I can usually guess who the bad guy or Merlin is.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和主谓一致。

例: I developed this skill when I was young because I was good at observing people's emotions. Now, I use it naturally without even thinking about it.

提案: 回答不够完整，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确说明才能如何帮助未来工作，并使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I believe this talent will help me in my future career because understanding people's feelings can improve communication and help in business negotiations.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，清楚表达观点。

例: No, I don't think anyone in my family has the same talent. For example, my mother is very independent and doesn't pay much attention to what others think.

× I think I have a good interaction because when I playing the avatar with my friends I always can guess who is the bad guy or who is the Merlin.

✓ I think I have good interaction because when I am playing the avatar with my friends I can always guess who is the bad guy or who is Merlin.

这里动词play后面缺少助动词am，play需要用现在进行时形式am playing，表示正在进行的动作。并且can always的顺序更自然。

× Was it mastered recently or when you were young?

✓ Did you master it recently or when you were young?

这里用过去时态表达过去的动作，mastered是过去分词，应该用一般过去时did master。

× I think when I was young I was really good at watching people and feel their emotion and when I grow up I I just use it when I don't even have to think about it.

✓ I think when I was young I was really good at watching people and feeling their emotions, and when I grew up I just used it without even having to think about it.

feel应改为动名词形式feeling，与前面的watching保持一致。grow up应使用过去式grew up，use应使用过去式used，表示过去的动作。don't even have to改为without even having to，表达更自然。

× Yes, I think to to just learn, read people's feelings. It help me to connect with people or something or just in a business, business negotiation.

✓ Yes, I think to just learn to read people's feelings. It helps me to connect with people or in business, like business negotiations.

help应加s，主语是it，第三人称单数。learn后面需要加不定式to read。business negotiation前加like表示举例。

× No because I think my mom is just like doesn't care what people think or doesn't care what people do it just she just do do everything he her she wants and she like and just be herself.

✓ No, because I think my mom just doesn't care what people think or do; she just does everything she wants and likes, and just is herself.

句子中代词使用混乱，he her she混用，应统一用she。动词do应使用第三人称单数does。句子需要分号或逗号分隔，保持句子通顺。