Talents— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和犹豫词汇，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语气词，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I don't think I have any natural talents. Instead, I believe that with effort and time, I can develop skills in areas I am interested in.

提案: 回答内容较为清晰，但存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和连贯的句子结构，同时避免重复的连接词。

例: I developed my photography skills during my second year at university. Although it's not an inborn talent, I have improved it through regular practice.

提案: 回答中充满了犹豫和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明观点，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体理由。

例: Yes, photography can be useful for my future career because it allows me to earn money and connect with others through visual storytelling.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的语法结构，避免重复，表达更自然。

例: Yes, my sister is talented in photography. Even without professional equipment, she can capture beautiful landscapes and scenes using her phone.

× I don't think I have a talent on every, uh, single things because umm, for me, I need to spend effort and time on, uh, what I want to do.

✓ I don't think I have a talent in every single thing because, umm, for me, I need to spend effort and time on what I want to do.

这里的“things”应为单数“thing”，因为前面用了“every”，后面应接单数名词。中文解释：‘every’后面应接单数名词，不能用复数。

× I don't think I have a talent on every, uh, single things because umm, for me, I need to spend effort and time on, uh, what I want to do.

✓ I don't think I have a talent in every single thing because, umm, for me, I need to spend effort and time on what I want to do.

‘have a talent’后面应使用介词‘in’而非‘on’。中文解释：‘have a talent’搭配介词‘in’，表示在某方面有天赋。

× It's not a easy thing.

✓ It's not an easy thing.

‘easy’以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词应为‘an’而非‘a’。中文解释：以元音音素开头的单词前用‘an’。

× Like in uh, indented talent.

✓ Like an innate talent.

原句中‘indented’应为‘innate’，且‘like an innate talent’更符合表达。中文解释：‘innate’意为天生的，‘indented’是拼写错误。

× I suppose I have relatively good skills in photography, but it's not a inborn talent.

✓ I suppose I have relatively good skills in photography, but it's not an inborn talent.

‘inborn’以元音音素开头，前面不定冠词应为‘an’。中文解释：以元音音素开头的单词前用‘an’。

× But uh, it's a skill that I have practiced regularly and gain some improved.

✓ But uh, it's a skill that I have practiced regularly and gained some improvement.

‘gain’应使用过去式‘gained’，‘improved’应改为名词‘improvement’。中文解释：并列动词时时态应一致，‘improved’作为形容词不合适，应用名词。

× Yes, I think photography can be, uh, useful skills because it can be a career to, uh, make a make a money and, uh, take a life on it.

✓ Yes, I think photography can be a useful skill because it can be a career to make money and make a living from it.

‘skills’应为单数‘skill’，‘make a money’错误，应为‘make money’，‘take a life on it’表达不当，应为‘make a living from it’。中文解释：不可数名词money前不加冠词，‘make a living’表示谋生。

× and some other, uh, in, in work that have a good talent of photography can also, uh, improve the, uh, improve the relationship with others.

✓ and some other work that requires good photography talent can also improve relationships with others.

‘in work that have a good talent of photography’表达不正确，应改为‘work that requires good photography talent’。中文解释：‘have a talent of’用法错误，应用‘have talent in’或‘requires talent’。

× and some other, uh, in, in work that have a good talent of photography can also, uh, improve the, uh, improve the relationship with others.

✓ and some other work that has good photography talent can also improve relationships with others.

‘work’为不可数名词，谓语动词应为单数‘has’，‘relationship’应为复数‘relationships’。中文解释：不可数名词用单数动词，‘relationship’复数表示多种关系。

× Yes, I think my uh, my sister is quite have a talent on the photography, even if she didn't have a professional equipment like a camera, umm, she can use her uh, his, his phone, her phone to capture the umm, beauty, umm, styling landscapes and sceneries.

✓ Yes, I think my sister quite has a talent for photography. Even if she doesn't have professional equipment like a camera, she can use her phone to capture beautiful landscapes and scenery.

‘is quite have’语法错误，应为‘quite has’；‘a professional equipment’错误，equipment为不可数名词；‘his, his phone, her phone’混乱，应统一为‘her phone’；‘beauty, styling landscapes and sceneries’表达不自然，应为‘beautiful landscapes and scenery’。中文解释：动词搭配错误，设备不可数，代词混用，形容词使用不当。