Swimming— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to provide a complete sentence and add reasons or examples to make your response more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I really enjoy swimming because it helps me relax and stay fit.

提案: Avoid repeating words and give a clear, complete answer. Explain why it might be difficult to learn swimming to enrich your response.

例: Yes, learning to swim can be difficult at first because it requires coordination and overcoming fear of water.

提案: Try to answer the question even if you are not sure. You can give a general idea or guess to show your ability to communicate.

例: In my country, many people like to go swimming in public pools or at the beach during the summer.

提案: Try to understand the question and give a simple comparison. Use linking words to organize your answer clearly.

例: Swimming in the pool is usually safer and more controlled, while swimming in the sea can be more exciting because of the waves and natural environment.

× I do not know this.

✓ I do not know.

The pronoun 'this' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The student should simply say 'I do not know' to express lack of knowledge about the question.

× Uh, I do not know the difference between and. I'm not like.

✓ Uh, I do not know the difference between them. I don't like swimming in either.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Between and' lacks the objects of comparison. Also, 'I'm not like' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like' to express preference. The corrected sentence completes the comparison and clarifies the student's opinion.