Swimming— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如"doesn't"应为"don't"，"can't swimming"应为"can't swim"。表达重复且不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达。

例: No, I don't like swimming because I find it dangerous and I'm not good at it.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如"learn to swim is so difficult"应为"learning to swim is difficult"，"can't finished"应为"couldn't finish"。内容重复且表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词并简化表达。

例: Yes, learning to swim is difficult for me. I couldn't finish my classes or pass the exam, so I don't enjoy it.

提案: 回答中句子结构重复且不够流畅，存在语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并避免重复表达。

例: In my country, summers are very hot and uncomfortable, so many people like to swim to cool down.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如"put the plastic in the in the butter"应为"throw plastic into the water"。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达更清晰。

例: Swimming in the pool is more comfortable because the water is cleaner, while the sea can be dirty due to people throwing plastic waste into it.

× No, I doesn't like swimming because I think it's dangerous and I can't swimming well, so I think I doesn't like swimming.

✓ No, I don't like swimming because I think it's dangerous and I can't swim well, so I think I don't like swimming.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，助动词应使用“do not”缩写为“don't”，而不是“doesn't”。此外，动词“swimming”在这里应使用原形“swim”，因为前面有情态动词“can”。

× No, I doesn't like swimming because I think it's dangerous and I can't swimming well, so I think I doesn't like swimming.

✓ No, I don't like swimming because I think it's dangerous and I can't swim well, so I think I don't like swimming.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式“swimming”。

× Yes, I think learn to swim is so difficult and in the grace way I learned it, but I can't finished my class and I didn't pass the exam.

✓ Yes, I think learning to swim is so difficult and in the grace way I learned it, but I can't finish my class and I didn't pass the exam.

“learn”作为动名词应使用“learning”。“can't finished”中“finished”应为动词原形“finish”，因为“can”后接动词原形。

× Yes, I think learn to swim is so difficult and in the grace way I learned it, but I can't finished my class and I didn't pass the exam.

✓ Yes, I think learning to swim is so difficult and in the grace way I learned it, but I couldn't finish my class and I didn't pass the exam.

句中描述过去的情况，助动词“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”。

× Yes, I think learn to swim is so difficult and in the grace way I learned it, but I can't finished my class and I didn't pass the exam.

✓ Yes, I think learning to swim is so difficult and in the right way I learned it, but I couldn't finish my class and I didn't pass the exam.

“grace way”应为“right way”，这里是词汇错误，属于介词短语搭配错误。

× In our country, in the summer, our country is very hot, the weather is uncomfortable, but in the water the temperature is so comfortable.

✓ In our country, in the summer, it is very hot and the weather is uncomfortable, but the temperature in the water is very comfortable.

句子结构不清晰，重复“our country”，应简化为“it is”。“in the water the temperature”应调整为“the temperature in the water”。

× So in the summer my country, many people want to swim and. They like it.

✓ So in the summer in my country, many people want to swim. They like it.

句子中“and.”使用错误，导致句子不完整，应拆分为两个完整句子。

× In the sea, everyone can put the plastic in the in the butter.

✓ In the sea, everyone can put plastic in the water.

“in the butter”应为“in the water”，是介词搭配错误。

× In the pool, they have one people to clean it.

✓ In the pool, they have one person to clean it.

“people”是复数，单数应使用“person”。