Swimming— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like swimming?
受験者
Absolutely, as I am a big fan of swimming and in the summer I go to swimming. Approximately twice a week and I enjoyed this joke and focus in the water.
試験官
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
受験者
At first I think it is difficult, but if you get the. If you know some tips, you will the learning of swimming is become easier. And my coach is great.
試験官
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
受験者
People in my country like to go swimming in indoor swimming pool because you can avoid sunburn and although it is rainy, you can still swim.
試験官
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
受験者
I think the danger degree is different. Dangerous degree is different because in the sea you can you may more dangerous because there are a lot of unknown.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like swimming?
スコア: 60.0提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to form a clear topic sentence and avoid unrelated phrases like "I enjoyed this joke." Also, use correct verb forms and prepositions, and keep your answer concise and coherent.
例: Yes, I really enjoy swimming. During the summer, I usually go swimming about twice a week because it helps me relax and stay fit.
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Make sure to complete your sentences and use proper grammar. Also, add linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific details.
例: At first, I thought learning to swim was difficult, but once I learned some useful tips from my coach, it became much easier.
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is relevant and clear, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and slightly more natural phrasing. Also, mention more specific details to enrich your response.
例: People in my country prefer swimming in indoor pools because they protect swimmers from sunburn, and even when it rains, swimming is still possible.
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating the same phrase. Use linking words to explain your point and provide specific reasons.
例: The main difference is the level of danger. Swimming in the sea can be more dangerous because of unpredictable currents and marine animals, while pools are safer and controlled environments.
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