Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Mejora la fluidez y la estructura de tus respuestas. Evita fragmentos y errores gramaticales, y usa conectores para unir ideas. Por ejemplo, en lugar de frases cortas y desordenadas, intenta responder con oraciones completas y claras.

例: Yes, I have a friend named Andrea Ann whom I met 20 years ago at school. I also have another friend, Tony, whom I met 50 years ago.

提案: Procura usar oraciones completas y conectores para que la respuesta sea más natural y coherente. Además, usa vocabulario adecuado y evita errores gramaticales.

例: I usually go out with my friends; we often visit a bar called Manolo where we have drinks. Sometimes, we go running together or have breakfast.

提案: Mejora la claridad y coherencia de tus respuestas. Usa conectores y estructura tus ideas para que sean comprensibles. Evita errores gramaticales y palabras incorrectas.

例: It depends on the day. I meet one friend every day because we train together at night, but I usually meet the others once a week.

提案: Evita errores gramaticales y repeticiones. Organiza tus ideas con oraciones claras y usa conectores para mejorar la fluidez.

例: Yes, I often go out with my friends because I recently broke up with my boyfriend, so they are my main company in my free time.

提案: Mejora la precisión y la estructura de tus respuestas. Evita errores y usa conectores para expresar tus ideas claramente.

例: My friends are like family to me, and I love spending important moments with my close friends.

提案: Organiza mejor tus ideas y usa vocabulario adecuado. Evita errores y frases confusas para que tu respuesta sea clara y natural.

例: On weekends, I prefer spending time with a group of friends, but during the week, I enjoy being with one close friend who is like a sister to me.

提案: Tu respuesta es clara, pero podrías enriquecerla con más detalles y conectores para que sea más natural y completa.

例: Actually, I don't usually invite friends to my home because I live with my family, and they are often at home. I don't want to disturb them.

× Actually, yes, I have my friend Andrea Ann.

✓ Actually, yes, I have a friend named Andrea Ann.

The phrase 'my friend Andrea Ann' is acceptable but 'a friend named Andrea Ann' is more natural in this context. Also, 'my friend' implies a specific person already known, but since the student is introducing the friend, 'a friend' is better.

× I met her. 20 years ago at the school and I have also my friend Tony that am I met him. 50.

✓ I met her 20 years ago at school, and I also have a friend Tony whom I met 50 years ago.

The sentence has several issues: 'I met her. 20 years ago' should be one sentence; 'at the school' should be 'at school' unless a specific school is named; 'I have also my friend Tony that am I met him. 50.' is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to 'I also have a friend Tony whom I met 50 years ago.' The past tense 'met' is used correctly but the sentence structure and pronouns were wrong.

× We have drink.

✓ We have a drink.

The phrase 'have drink' is incorrect; 'have' as a verb here requires a noun or gerund. 'Have a drink' is correct. Alternatively, 'We are drinking' would be correct if describing an action in progress.

× Or also go having breakfast.

✓ Or also go to have breakfast.

The phrase 'go having breakfast' is incorrect. The verb 'go' is usually followed by 'to' plus base verb, so 'go to have breakfast' is correct.

× Actually it depends in cool becauses.

✓ Actually, it depends on the coolness because...

The phrase 'depends in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'depends on'. The rest of the sentence is unclear and may need rephrasing.

× My friend on there all night mate.

✓ My friend is there all night, mate.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' and the pronoun usage is unclear. Adding 'is' clarifies the sentence.

× Every day because we go to train.

✓ Every day because we go to train.

The phrase 'go to train' is missing a preposition or article. It should be 'go to training' or 'go to the train' depending on meaning. Assuming 'training' is intended: 'go to training'.

× Am together but I usually meet the others once a week.

✓ I am together with them, but I usually meet the others once a week.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' and the phrase 'am together' is incomplete without 'with them'.

× Yes, I go often with my friends be 'cause I have I had just break up with my boyfriend and I.

✓ Yes, I often go out with my friends because I have just broken up with my boyfriend.

The sentence has pronoun confusion and tense errors. 'I have I had just break up' is incorrect; correct is 'I have just broken up'. Also, 'go often with my friends' is better as 'often go out with my friends'.

× Only have these this company in my free time.

✓ I only have this company in my free time.

The phrase 'these this company' is incorrect; 'this company' is singular and correct here.

× My friends are like my family an I love going out with them on sorry my important moments with my close friends.

✓ My friends are like my family, and I love going out with them on my important moments with my close friends.

The word 'an' should be 'and'. The phrase 'on sorry my important moments' is unclear and likely a mishearing or error; corrected to 'on my important moments'.

× Well, I prefer a on weekend is the with a group of friends.

✓ Well, I prefer to spend weekends with a group of friends.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to a natural expression.

× But in my routine I love this thing with one frame that is like my sister.

✓ But in my routine, I love spending time with one friend who is like my sister.

'This thing with one frame' is incorrect; likely meant 'spending time with one friend'. 'Frame' is a mispronunciation or error for 'friend'.

× Actually not, because I live with my family and they are always at home and I don't want to disturb them.

✓ Actually, no, because I live with my family and they are always at home, and I don't want to disturb them.

Minor corrections: 'Actually not' should be 'Actually, no'. Added commas for clarity.