Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有語法錯誤，例如 'who company with me' 應改為 'who has accompanied me'，並且句子結構可以更自然流暢。建議使用更簡潔且正確的句子來表達長期友誼。

例: Yes, I have a friend who has been with me since elementary school. Although we now attend different universities, we still meet frequently.

提案: 句子中動詞形式錯誤，'engaging' 應改為 'engage'。建議使用完整且正確的句子，並且可以加入連接詞使句子更流暢。

例: We usually engage in various activities, such as shopping, reading, or just chatting with each other.

提案: 句子中有語法錯誤和重複字詞，'let each other' 用法不當，應改為 'meet'，並且 'we we' 是重複。建議簡化句子並使用正確的動詞。

例: We often meet at a coffee shop where we can spend the whole day chatting.

提案: 回答簡潔且基本正確，但可以更自然地表達，例如使用 'during' 來描述假期時間。

例: Yes, absolutely. I usually hang out with my friends during summer and winter vacations.

提案: 回答表達了情感，但 'pour out my anxiety' 用詞稍顯生硬，可以用更自然的表達方式。

例: Friends are very important to me because I can share my worries with them when I face difficult situations.

提案: 句子結構不完整且語法錯誤，'Be introverted' 應改為完整句子。建議使用完整且連貫的句子來表達個人偏好。

例: Personally, I prefer a small social circle because I am introverted, so having a few close friends is enough for me.

提案: 時態不一致，'invited' 應改為 'invite'，'him movies' 應為 'movies'，且動詞形式不一致。建議使用正確時態和動詞形式。

例: Yes, definitely. I often invite my friends to my home to watch movies and play Nintendo games together.

× I have a friend who company with me through the elementary school, junior high school and Senior High School.

✓ I have a friend who accompanied me through elementary school, junior high school, and senior high school.

The word 'company' is incorrectly used as a verb here; the correct verb is 'accompanied'. Also, 'elementary school', 'junior high school', and 'senior high school' should not have 'the' before them in this context. The phrase 'Senior High School' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun.

× Though we are not at the same university but we met each other frequently.

✓ Though we are not at the same university, we meet each other frequently.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'though' and 'but' together, which is redundant. Also, 'met' should be 'meet' to match the present tense context. A comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× We usually engaging in various activities such as shopping, reading or just chatting with each other.

✓ We usually engage in various activities such as shopping, reading, or just chatting with each other.

The verb 'engaging' is incorrectly used here; after 'usually', the base form 'engage' should be used. Also, a comma is needed before 'or' in the list for clarity.

× We often let each other in a coffee shop we we can spend all day to chat with each other.

✓ We often meet each other in a coffee shop where we can spend all day chatting with each other.

The phrase 'let each other' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'meet each other'. Also, 'we we' is a typo and should be 'where'. The phrase 'spend all day to chat' should be 'spend all day chatting' to use the gerund form after 'spend time'.

× I hang out with my friends in summer vacation and winter vacation.

✓ I hang out with my friends during summer vacation and winter vacation.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate time periods like vacations.

× If I'm in tough situations, I can pour out my anxiety to them, so they are very important to me.

✓ If I'm in tough situations, I can pour out my anxiety to them, so they are very important to me.

No grammatical error detected in pronoun usage in this sentence.

× Personally I prefer a small social circle. Be introverted, have few friends is enough.

✓ Personally, I prefer a small social circle. Being introverted and having few friends is enough for me.

The second sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. It should be rephrased to include a subject and verb, using gerunds 'Being' and 'having' to express the ideas properly.

× I invited my friends to my home to watch him movies and playing Nintendo games.

✓ I invite my friends to my home to watch movies and play Nintendo games.

The verb 'invited' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'invite' is better. 'Him movies' is incorrect; it should be 'movies'. Also, 'playing' should be 'play' to parallel 'watch'.