Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法准确性，例如“Thanks to her helps”应改为“Thanks to her help”。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I have a close friend named Rosie who supported me a lot while I was preparing for the college entrance exam. Thanks to her help, I was able to get into my ideal university.

提案: 回答中应注意语法和表达的自然性，如“competitive game”应具体说明游戏类型，且“in a one team”应改为“on the same team”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: We usually play video games together because we are all big fans, especially competitive games. Usually, we are on the same team, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明见面地点，并注意句子完整性和连贯性。

例: We often meet online because we attend different universities that are far apart. However, when we have time, we like to go shopping together.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不当，如“relax stress”应为“relieve stress”，“This activity can help us. Refresh our mind”应连贯表达。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often go out with my friends. Going out helps us relieve stress, especially after long periods of studying. It refreshes our minds and motivates us.

提案: 回答中代词使用混乱，且表达不够清晰。建议明确表达朋友的重要性，并注意代词一致性和句子完整性。

例: My friend is very important to me because we have known each other since childhood, and our parents are also good friends. This has made our relationship very strong.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“A1 on one communication”应为“one-on-one communication”，且句子断裂。建议简洁明了表达偏好并说明原因。

例: I prefer spending time with one friend because I find it difficult to manage complex relationships and pay attention to everyone's feelings in a group.

提案: 回答中语法和句子结构混乱，建议简化表达，注意连贯性和语法准确性。

例: No, I don't usually invite friends to my home because I live with my busy parents. Preparing food and drinks for guests would add extra pressure on them.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达观点。

例: No, there isn't much difference. We usually go shopping, have lunch together, and watch movies when we have free time.

提案: 回答未完成且表达不够连贯。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think it depends on the atmosphere. For example, noisy places are not suitable for serious conversations like business matters because it's hard to focus.

× Thanks to her helps, I finally went to my ideal university.

✓ Thanks to her help, I finally went to my ideal university.

“helps”是“help”的复数形式，但这里应使用不可数名词“help”，表示帮助。

× We usually play games together as we all are big fans of video games, especially the competitive game.

✓ We usually play games together as we all are big fans of video games, especially competitive games.

“the competitive game”应为复数形式“competitive games”，因为指的是多种竞赛类游戏。

× We usually are in a one team.

✓ We usually are in one team.

“a one team”中“one”前不需要冠词“a”，且“team”是单数，表达“一个团队”时应去掉“a”。

× Uh, we often meet each other online since we are in different universities and. Are really far. But where relationship is very good, we often go shopping in.

✓ Uh, we often meet each other online since we are in different universities and are really far apart. But our relationship is very good, we often go shopping together.

原句断句错误，缺少主语和谓语，且“where relationship”应为“our relationship”，句子结构混乱。

× Going out is a good way for both of us to relax stress, especially under a long term study.

✓ Going out is a good way for both of us to relax and relieve stress, especially during long-term study.

“relax stress”搭配不当，应使用“relax and relieve stress”；“under a long term study”应改为“during long-term study”，且“long-term”需连字符。

× This activity can help us. Refresh our mind and be motivated.

✓ This activity can help us refresh our minds and be motivated.

句子中间不应有句号，且“mind”应为复数“minds”，保持主语一致。

× She really matters to me as we met each other when we were very young and our parents are also good friends so our relationship will really good.

✓ She really matters to me as we met each other when we were very young and our parents are also good friends, so our relationship is really good.

“will really good”语法错误，应为“is really good”；“relationship”是单数，谓语用“is”。

× I want to be friends with him.

✓ I want to be friends with her.

前文提到的朋友是女性“Rosie”，此处代词应与性别一致，使用“her”。

× I would choose A1 on one communication as I'm not good at manage the complex relationship, it's too hard for me to. Care about everyone's emotion.

✓ I would choose one-on-one communication as I'm not good at managing complex relationships; it's too hard for me to care about everyone's emotions.

“A1 on one communication”应为“one-on-one communication”；“manage”应为动名词“managing”；句子断句错误，需用分号连接；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。

× No I don't as I am staying with my parents now and my parents job are very busy so and but if I invite my friends to my home we need to prepare delicious food and drinks to them.

✓ No, I don't as I am staying with my parents now and my parents' jobs are very busy. But if I invite my friends to my home, we need to prepare delicious food and drinks for them.

“parents job”应为复数所有格“parents' jobs”；“prepare ... to them”应为“prepare ... for them”；句子断句需调整。

× No, we don't. Actually our active is quite boring since we just go shopping and take a delicious meal in the noon and if we have leisure time we will watch a movie and that's all.

✓ No, we don't. Actually, our activities are quite boring since we just go shopping and have a delicious meal at noon. If we have leisure time, we will watch a movie, and that's all.

“active”应为复数名词“activities”；“take a delicious meal in the noon”应为“have a delicious meal at noon”；句子需加逗号分隔。

× Well, I think this really depends on the atmosphere. For example, in a noisy place, there is no doubt that it's hard for people to talk about a serious thing such as business matters and.

✓ Well, I think this really depends on the atmosphere. For example, in a noisy place, there is no doubt that it's hard for people to talk about serious things such as business matters.

“a serious thing”应为复数“serious things”；句尾“and”多余，应删除。