Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda zaman qarışıqlığı var və cümlələrinizdə təkrarlar çoxdur. Daha aydın və qısa cümlələr qurmağa çalışın, məsələn, keçmişdə və indiki zamanda qarışdırmayın və "uh" kimi sözləri azaltın.

例: Yes, I have a friend named Aidan whom I've known since childhood. She is also my relative on my father's side, and we have been close for many years.

提案: Cümlələriniz qarışıq və anlaşılmazdır. Cavabınızı daha sadə və məntiqli edin, mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə verin.

例: When I meet my friends, we usually eat together and talk about educational topics. We also discuss how other people behave towards us.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlar və qeyri-dəqiqlik var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və qısa edin, oyunların adlarını düzgün yazın və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

例: We often meet at cafes where we play games like Uno and chess. These meetings are very enjoyable for us.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlar var. Daha düzgün qrammatika və əlaqələndirici sözlər istifadə edin, məsələn, "because my friends work" və "we meet on weekends" kimi.

例: I don't go out often with my friends because they work during the week. We usually meet on weekends at a cafe with a nice atmosphere where we can talk and play games.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə ifadə və qrammatika səhvləri var. Daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və təkrarları azaldın.

例: Friends are very important to me because they increase my happiness. I enjoy spending time with them and I really love them.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və təkrarlar var. "Meat" sözünü "meet" kimi düzgün yazın və fikrinizi daha aydın ifadə edin.

例: Sometimes I prefer spending time with one friend, but other times I enjoy being with a group of friends because they make me happy.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə söz seçimi və qrammatika səhvləri var. "Meat" əvəzinə "meet" istifadə edin və fikrinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin.

例: I would invite my friends to my home, but I prefer to meet them outside because I feel more relaxed there. When they come to my home, I sometimes feel tired.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və qrammatik səhvlər var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və strukturlaşdırılmış edin.

例: I don't think there is much difference. I used to meet my long-time friends at university, but I also have a friend I met at work.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə çoxlu "uh" və təkrarlar var. Daha aydın və qısa ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikrinizi daha yaxşı əlaqələndirin.

例: It depends on the person. I prefer quiet and cozy places to meet, while others like noisy places with music and dancing.

× I had a friend I know for a long time, her name is Aidan.

✓ I have a friend I have known for a long time, her name is Aidan.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Had' is past tense, but 'I know' is present tense. Since the friend is still known, present perfect 'have known' is appropriate to express an action continuing to the present.

× When we meeting, we are eating during eating, we are talking about some educational topics and, uh, other people, uh, behavior to us because, uh, I don't think So what can I say about, uh, other things and that's.

✓ When we meet, we eat, and during eating, we talk about some educational topics and other people's behavior towards us because, uh, I don't know what else to say about other things.

Incorrect verb forms 'meeting' and 'are eating' are used instead of simple present tense 'meet' and 'eat' to describe habitual actions. Also, 'other people behavior to us' should be 'other people's behavior towards us' to use correct possessive and preposition.

× We, we meet often, but when we want to different meet and we go to cafe and play some games like Uno, like Shahmad chest, like chess, like, uh, I don't think what can I say, but that's all.

✓ We meet often, but when we want to meet somewhere different, we go to a cafe and play some games like Uno, Shatranj, chess, and so on.

Incorrect preposition 'to different meet' should be 'to meet somewhere different'. Also, 'go to cafe' needs an article 'a cafe'. The game name 'Shahmad chest' seems to be a mispronunciation of 'Shatranj' (chess).

× Not often because my friends are working and we can meet weekends and we go some cafe.

✓ Not often because my friends are working, and we can meet on weekends and go to some cafes.

Missing prepositions 'on' before 'weekends' and 'to' before 'some cafes' are needed for correct English usage.

× There's atmosphere is so good and we can talk each other and uh, and then we can play game.

✓ The atmosphere is so good, and we can talk to each other, and then we can play games.

'There's atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'The atmosphere'. Also, 'talk each other' requires the preposition 'to' as 'talk to each other'. 'Play game' should be plural 'play games'.

× They are more important than you think because when I meet my friends they are increase my happiness level and I enjoyed to get being together then and I love them.

✓ They are more important than you think because when I meet my friends, they increase my happiness level, and I enjoy being together with them, and I love them.

Incorrect verb forms 'are increase' should be 'increase', 'enjoyed to get being' should be 'enjoy being'. Also, 'being together then' is awkward; 'being together with them' is clearer.

× Sometimes yes, sometimes not, uh, because I like meat. My group friends, uh, they are enjoyable and make me happy.

✓ Sometimes yes, sometimes no, because I like meeting my group of friends; they are enjoyable and make me happy.

'Meat' is a mispronunciation of 'meet'. Also, 'my group friends' should be 'my group of friends' for correct possessive structure.

× I would invite my friends to my home, but I prefer meat, uh, them on the out outside, uh, because uh, I want to feel uh, relaxable.

✓ I would invite my friends to my home, but I prefer to meet them outside because I want to feel relaxed.

'Meat' should be 'meet'. 'On the out outside' is incorrect; 'outside' alone suffices. 'Relaxable' is not a correct adjective; 'relaxed' is appropriate.

× I don't think so. Is there difference? Uh, but uh, when I meet my uh long friendship, I meet them at university, but I have one friend where is meet where I worked and it's the last my friend.

✓ I don't think so. Is there a difference? When I met my long-time friends, I met them at university, but I have one friend whom I met where I worked, and he is my last friend.

Incorrect tense 'meet' should be past tense 'met' to refer to past events. 'Where is meet' is incorrect; 'whom I met' is correct relative pronoun usage. 'It's the last my friend' should be 'he is my last friend'.

× Because of, uh, it's depends on person. Uh, I like being silence, uh, atmosphere, but uh, others like, uh, noisy atmosphere and listening music and dance, but I don't uh, like that.

✓ Because it depends on the person. I like a silent atmosphere, but others like noisy atmospheres with music and dancing, but I don't like that.

'Because of, uh, it's depends' is incorrect; 'Because it depends' is correct. 'Being silence' should be 'a silent'. 'Listening music and dance' should be 'music and dancing'.