Friends— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?
受験者
Yes I do umm, uh, she's my best friend now and uh, she's also my secondary school friends and we are, uh, and we are umm, uh, and we know each other for, and we have known each other for umm, for approximately 6 years.
試験官
What do you usually do with your friends?
受験者
Umm, we usually, when we have uh, our free times, we usually go hanging out. We usually hang out together uh, to watch movies or to umm uh, go to coffee shops and uh, chat with each other, umm, chat, uh, share about our story, life and also.
試験官
Where do you often meet each other?
受験者
We often meet each other in my home, in my house, but sometimes we also hang out and go to the shopping malls or the coffee shop because we want to privacy.
試験官
Do you often go out with your friends?
受験者
Umm yes I do. We umm, In the past we owe umm, we usually hang out with each other each umm every week. But now we have all, we have all we all have all have on visit so we rarely go hang out.
試験官
How important are friends to you?
受験者
Well, umm, she's my best friend, so I, umm, so she's very important for me because she helped me in many ways in, uh, many, uh, difficult situation in my life and she's, uh. MMM.
試験官
Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?
受験者
Well, actually, I want to spend time with one friend and, or to dinner with other group friends because, umm, if you, I, if I spend time with one friend, we have a lot of time to share, uh, our personal story that donors fear for everyone, uh, judgment.
試験官
Would you invite friends to your home?
受験者
It depends on really if umm there if, if my my friends, if we uh, they are my best friends. I really I I always welcome them for to welcome my home, but if we do not close each other so I don't like it.
試験官
Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?
受験者
Umm, yes, of course be uh, in the past, because we, uh, me and my friends, uh, umm, studied in the same secondary school, so we uh, meet each other, we met each other every day, but now we study in the diff different school. So it, we rarely meet each each other.
試験官
Why are some places suitable for meeting while others are not?
受験者
I think it depends on really if the if it's just a normal, a normal outing, so the the places, so we don't need to choose the suitable places, but if the building is requires A solemnity and.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you have a friend you have known for a long time?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ lặp lại và ngập ngừng, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.
例: Yes, I have a best friend whom I've known for about six years since secondary school. We have maintained a close friendship throughout that time.
What do you usually do with your friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "usually" và "umm" nhiều lần, đồng thời sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
例: In our free time, we usually hang out by watching movies or visiting coffee shops where we chat and share stories about our lives.
Where do you often meet each other?
スコア: 68.0提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, ví dụ như "in my home, in my house". Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
例: We often meet at my house, but sometimes we go to shopping malls or coffee shops for more privacy.
Do you often go out with your friends?
スコア: 55.0提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và ngập ngừng, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập nói câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.
例: Yes, I used to hang out with my friends every week, but now we rarely meet because we are all busy with our own schedules.
How important are friends to you?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên tránh ngập ngừng và nói rõ ràng, đầy đủ ý. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để thể hiện cảm xúc và lý do bạn coi trọng bạn bè.
例: My best friend is very important to me because she has supported me through many difficult situations in my life.
Do you prefer to spend time with one friend or with a group of friends?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều ngập ngừng và lỗi ngữ pháp, làm ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập nói câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.
例: I prefer spending time with one friend because we can share personal stories without fear of judgment, but I also enjoy having dinner with a group of friends sometimes.
Would you invite friends to your home?
スコア: 58.0提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng.
例: I usually invite my best friends to my home, but I prefer not to invite acquaintances if we are not close.
Is there a difference between where you meet friends now and where you used to meet them in the past?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn nên tránh ngập ngừng và lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn để trả lời câu hỏi.
例: Yes, in the past we met every day at secondary school, but now we attend different schools, so we rarely meet.
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