Watch— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally good but could be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "Wearing a watch on such events also make me feel more confident and stylish," say "Wearing a watch on such occasions makes me feel more confident and stylish." Also, clarify what "A1" refers to for better understanding.

例: I seldom wear a watch in my daily life. However, I prefer to wear a classic wristwatch during festivals or special occasions because it perfectly complements my outfit and adds a touch of elegance. Wearing a watch on such occasions makes me feel more confident and stylish.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains a repetition error "it was a it was a" which should be avoided. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence, for example, use "Moreover" or "In addition" to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I have received a watch as a gift once. It was a birthday present from my parents, and I really appreciated it because it was both stylish and practical. Since then, I have worn it regularly as it helps me keep track of time efficiently.

提案: Your answer is well-structured and uses linking words effectively. To improve, you could add more specific examples or comparisons to enrich your response and make it more engaging.

例: Many people prefer to wear expensive watches because they serve as a symbol of wealth and success. For instance, wearing a luxury watch like a Rolex can create a good impression in professional and social settings. Moreover, these watches are known for their exquisite craftsmanship and durability, often lasting for decades.

提案: Your answer is clear and coherent with good use of linking words. To enhance it further, you could include a personal opinion or example to make your answer more specific and engaging.

例: I think wearing a watch is quite important because it helps people manage their time efficiently, especially during busy daily routines. Moreover, having a watch on your wrist is very convenient as it allows you to quickly check the time without having to take out your phone. For example, when I am in meetings, I find it polite to glance at my watch rather than my phone.

× Wearing a watch on such events also make me feel more confident and stylish.

✓ Wearing a watch on such events also makes me feel more confident and stylish.

The subject 'Wearing a watch on such events' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number.

× Have you ever got a watch as a gift?

✓ Have you ever gotten a watch as a gift?

In present perfect questions, the past participle 'gotten' is preferred over the simple past 'got' in standard English to indicate experience up to now.

× It was a it was a birthday present from my parents and I really appreciated it because it was both stylish and practical.

✓ It was a birthday present from my parents and I really appreciated it because it was both stylish and practical.

The phrase 'a it was a' is a repetition and causes sentence structure error; removing the repeated words corrects the sentence.

× For instance, wearing a luxury watch can create good impression in professional and social settings.

✓ For instance, wearing a luxury watch can create a good impression in professional and social settings.

The phrase 'create good impression' is missing the article 'a' before 'good impression' which is necessary in English.