Cars— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了主要观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态一致性，改进表达的流畅性，并避免重复。

例: I didn't enjoy traveling by car when I was a kid because I suffered from severe car sickness. Therefore, I usually preferred taking public transportation or walking instead of traveling by car or bus.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，使用准确的词汇，并且避免模糊表达。

例: Although I am not very interested in cars, I imagine that I would like a sprint car because it looks very cool and attracts a lot of attention.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和句子结构不完整，且结尾不清楚。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达原因，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have a driver's license. Besides, I am a bit afraid of driving on the road due to the possibility of accidents.

提案: 回答内容有趣且相关，但语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

例: When there is a traffic jam, I try to keep the driver awake by singing or chatting with them to make sure they stay alert.

× I didn't enjoy traveling by car because I have severe car sick, so I usually choose traveling by public transportation or walking rather than car or bus.

✓ I didn't enjoy traveling by car because I have severe car sickness, so I usually choose traveling by public transportation or walking rather than by car or bus.

这里'sick'应为名词形式'sickness'，表示“晕车症”。另外，'rather than car or bus'中缺少介词，应该是'rather than by car or bus'。

× I didn't enjoy traveling by car because I have severe car sick, so I usually choose traveling by public transportation or walking rather than car or bus.

✓ I didn't enjoy traveling by car because I have severe car sickness, so I usually choose traveling by public transportation or walking rather than by car or bus.

'rather than'后面需要加介词'by'，表示交通方式。

× I am not engaged in cars but in my imagination I think I really like the Sprint car which is really cool and can attract others size.

✓ I am not engaged with cars but in my imagination I think I really like the Sprint car which is really cool and can attract others' attention.

'engaged in cars'应改为'engaged with cars'，表示对汽车的兴趣。'attract others size'表达错误，应为'attract others' attention'，意思是吸引别人的注意。

× I am not engaged in cars but in my imagination I think I really like the Sprint car which is really cool and can attract others size.

✓ I am not engaged with cars but in my imagination I think I really like the Sprint car which is really cool and can attract others' attention.

'others size'中'others'后应加所有格符号，表示“别人的注意力”。

× I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have any license about car.

✓ I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have any license for driving a car.

'license about car'表达不正确，应为'license for driving a car'，表示驾驶汽车的执照。

× I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have any license about car.

✓ I prefer to be a passenger because I don't have any license for driving a car.

'license'后面应接介词'for'，表示用途。

× Besides, I am a little bit afraid of driving on the road which may happen some disaster like.

✓ Besides, I am a little bit afraid of driving on the road because some disasters may happen.

原句结构混乱，'which may happen some disaster like'不完整，应改为完整句子表达原因。

× Besides, I am a little bit afraid of driving on the road which may happen some disaster like.

✓ Besides, I am a little bit afraid of driving on the road because some disasters may happen.

'afraid of driving on the road which may happen some disaster like'中介词使用不当，需调整句子结构。

× As a passenger, I think the most important to me is make the driver not want to sleep.

✓ As a passenger, I think the most important thing for me is to keep the driver from feeling sleepy.

原句缺少名词'thing'，'make the driver not want to sleep'表达不自然，应改为'keep the driver from feeling sleepy'。

× So I always sing with them or chatting with them in order to check that they are all awake.

✓ So I always sing with them or chat with them in order to make sure that they are all awake.

'chatting'应改为动词原形'chat'，与前面的'sing'保持一致。'check'改为'make sure'更符合语境。