Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, say 'I often visit websites related to movies, such as cinema and Zinc Movie, because I enjoy watching films during weekends.'

例: I often visit websites related to movies, such as cinema and Zinc Movie, because I enjoy watching films during weekends.

提案: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence and add details with linking words. For example, 'My favourite website is Zinc Movie because I can watch Hindi and Tamil movies there when I have free time at home, especially on weekends.'

例: My favourite website is Zinc Movie because I can watch Hindi and Tamil movies there when I have free time at home, especially on weekends.

提案: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain changes clearly. For example, 'Yes, the websites I visit are regularly updated, and their interfaces have changed recently, about one or two weeks ago.'

例: Yes, the websites I visit are regularly updated, and their interfaces have changed recently, about one or two weeks ago.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples with linking words. For example, 'Different kinds of websites are popular in my country. For instance, many students prefer study apps and websites, while businessmen like to visit business-related websites.'

例: Different kinds of websites are popular in my country. For instance, many students prefer study apps and websites, while businessmen like to visit business-related websites.

× I often visit website is some website like this is cinema and zinc movie.

✓ I often visit websites like Cinema and Zinc Movie.

The word 'website' should be plural 'websites' because the student is talking about more than one website. Also, the sentence structure was incorrect and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× I like movie and I weekend watch cinema and with my.

✓ I like movies and I watch cinema on weekends with my friends.

The sentence was ungrammatical and incomplete. 'Movie' should be plural 'movies'. 'Weekend' should be 'on weekends' to indicate time. 'With my' is incomplete and needs an object like 'friends'.

× My favorite website is Zinc movie and I watch Hindi and Tamil movie when I when I free time in my home and weekend I watch movie.

✓ My favorite website is Zinc Movie and I watch Hindi and Tamil movies when I have free time at home, and on weekends I watch movies.

'Movie' should be plural 'movies' because multiple movies are watched. 'When I when I free time' is incorrect; it should be 'when I have free time'. 'In my home' is better as 'at home'. 'Weekend' should be 'on weekends'.

× Yeah, yes, the website are regular regular regularly update and there's there's a interface are changing after one or two week before.

✓ Yes, the websites are regularly updated and the interface has changed one or two weeks ago.

'Website' should be plural 'websites' to match 'are'. 'Regular regular regularly update' is redundant and incorrect; 'regularly updated' is correct. 'There's a interface are changing' is incorrect; it should be 'the interface has changed'. 'After one or two week before' is incorrect; 'one or two weeks ago' is correct.

× It is different website are popular in my country.

✓ Different websites are popular in my country.

'Website' should be plural 'websites' to agree with 'are'. 'It is' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× It is the one of the many student like the study apps or website and some businessmen are like to business related website and some.

✓ It is one of the many students who like study apps or websites, and some businessmen like business-related websites.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'many'. 'Website' should be plural 'websites'. 'Are like to' is incorrect; 'like' is sufficient. Sentence structure was incomplete and needed correction.