Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用更准确的词汇来描述网站的功能。

例: I often visit a question-and-answer website called Zhihu, which is similar to Quora. It has many high-quality posts where people ask various questions and experts provide detailed answers.

提案: 回答中表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议使用更清晰的句子结构，避免口语填充词，并且详细说明网站的特点。

例: My favorite website is Zhihu, the Chinese version of Quora. It requires users to answer questions with reasons, which makes the posts logical and informative. Many professionals contribute there.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，建议简化句子，明确表达变化的内容，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I used to visit news websites to stay updated with social news. However, now I prefer Zhihu because it provides deeper insights and analysis about current events.

提案: 回答中有过多的口语填充词，建议减少“umm”等词的使用，使用更准确的词汇，并且提供更具体的例子。

例: Social media websites are very popular in my country because people want to get the latest news, especially about entertainment and celebrities, as many are curious about their lives.

× I often visit a query and answer website to WHO which is the China version of Quora and there are lots of high quality post.

✓ I often visit a question and answer website called Zhihu, which is the Chinese version of Quora, and there are lots of high quality posts.

这里“post”应使用复数形式“posts”，因为表示多个帖子。英语中可数名词表示多个时需用复数形式。

× People ask various kind of questions and famous the famous we answer it.

✓ People ask various kinds of questions and the famous answer them.

“kind”应使用复数“kinds”，因为表示多种类型；“questions”是复数，代词“it”应改为“them”指代复数。

× My favorite website is Juhu which is the China Chinese version of Coral Umm into her website there is a rule that ask yes or no then answer why umm the post.

✓ My favorite website is Juhu, which is the Chinese version of Quora. On this website, there is a rule to ask yes or no questions and then answer why. The posts are logical and rigid.

“post”应为复数“posts”，因为指多个帖子；句子结构调整使表达更清晰。

× The post are logic and rigid.

✓ The posts are logical and rigid.

“post”应为复数“posts”，且“logic”应为形容词“logical”。

× Yes, there are some changes to the website I often visit before.

✓ Yes, there are some changes to the websites I often visited before.

“website”应为复数“websites”，因为指多个网站。

× Yes, there are some changes to the website I often visit before.

✓ Yes, there are some changes to the websites I often visited before.

“visit”应使用过去式“visited”，因为“before”表示过去时间。

× I often visit some news websites like sign up and to find the to to keep keep updated with the social news.

✓ I often visit some news websites to keep updated with social news.

句中“sign up and to find the to to keep keep”语义不清，简化为正确表达；“news”不可数，前面不加复数形式。

× However, nowadays I often visit you who which can provide. Insight about the news because I think the news is all well.

✓ However, nowadays I often visit Zhihu, which can provide insight about the news because I think the news is reliable.

“you who”应为“Zhihu”，且“Insight”不需大写；“news”不可数，表达需准确。

× In my country umm the social media websites are very popular because people want to umm visit the latest news and set.

✓ In my country, social media websites are very popular because people want to visit the latest news and updates.

“news”不可数，且“set”应为“updates”或类似词，表示最新信息。

× Especially news about entertainment about umm stars because most people are very curious about those news.

✓ Especially news about entertainment and stars because most people are very curious about that news.

“news”不可数，指代时用“that news”而非“those news”。