Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa eigo de shizen ni kataru koto ga taisetsu desu. Tatoeba, 'I often visit websites like Facebook, TikTok, and YouTube because I like to keep up with the news and watch interesting videos.' to iu fuu ni, mujun ya fukuzatsu na kotoba o sakete, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

例: I often visit websites like Facebook, TikTok, and YouTube because I like to keep up with the news and watch interesting videos.

提案: Kotae wa chokusetsu shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'My favourite website is Facebook because it helps me communicate with my family and friends using Messenger.' to iu fuu ni, jisho teki na kotoba o tsukatte, setsumei o fukameru koto ga taisetsu desu.

例: My favourite website is Facebook because it helps me communicate with my family and friends using Messenger.

提案: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I have changed the websites I visit. If there is no new content on Facebook, I switch to TikTok because it has many interesting dance videos.' to iu fuu ni, rikai shi yasui setsumei o shite kudasai.

例: Yes, I have changed the websites I visit. If there is no new content on Facebook, I switch to TikTok because it has many interesting dance videos.

提案: Kotae wa motto seikaku de, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'In my country, popular websites include Facebook and TikTok. Facebook helps people communicate with their families, and TikTok offers many interesting videos related to hobbies.' to iu fuu ni setsumei shite kudasai.

例: In my country, popular websites include Facebook and TikTok. Facebook helps people communicate with their families, and TikTok offers many interesting videos related to hobbies.

× I, I often visit and, uh, website like uh, Facebook, tik and TikTok and sometimes I visit the YouTube because uh, they have, uh, uh, because I like to, uh, say in the news from my Facebook.

✓ I often visit websites like Facebook, TikTok, and sometimes YouTube because they have news that I like to follow.

The word 'website' should be plural 'websites' because the student mentions multiple sites. Also, 'the YouTube' is incorrect; 'YouTube' is a proper noun and does not need 'the'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Many people at website is, umm, actually Facebook and messenger because uh, uh, they can, they can, umm, communicate in, in our family or, or uh, friends, uh, using the messenger.

✓ Many people use websites like Facebook and Messenger because they can communicate with family and friends using Messenger.

The phrase 'at website' is incorrect; it should be 'use websites'. Also, 'the messenger' should be 'Messenger' without 'the' as it is a proper noun. The sentence is corrected for article usage and clarity.

× Yes, umm, I, I have that change of website apps like uh tiktok umm, if we don't have the, the new in the Facebook, I change to go to the uh another website like uh tiktok, because the tiktok is very interesting. They have so many people dance.

✓ Yes, I have changed website apps like TikTok. If there is no new content on Facebook, I switch to another website like TikTok because TikTok is very interesting. Many people dance there.

'I have that change of website apps' is incorrect; it should be 'I have changed website apps'. 'The new in the Facebook' is incorrect; it should be 'new content on Facebook'. 'The TikTok' should be 'TikTok' without 'the'. Plurality and article usage are corrected.

× In my, in my country, the popular website like Facebook also, and sometimes Tiktok because their Facebook is, they have, uh, uh, it's helped to, to how to communicate the, the families and also, and the Tiktok is also, uh, watching the videos. They have interesting and hobbies.

✓ In my country, popular websites include Facebook and sometimes TikTok because Facebook helps families communicate, and TikTok is also for watching interesting videos and hobbies.

'The popular website like Facebook also' should be 'popular websites include Facebook'. 'Their Facebook is' is incorrect; it should be 'Facebook helps'. 'The TikTok' should be 'TikTok' without 'the'. Plural forms and article usage are corrected for clarity.