Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I often visit websites that offer various content, such as TV shows, movies, or series, because I enjoy watching them during lunch or dinner time.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且缺少连贯性。建议注意时态一致，正确使用冠词和动词形式，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: My favorite website recently is Disney Plus because it has Modern Family, my favorite American TV series. I like watching it during lunch because it is very funny and suits my lunchtime well.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且缺少具体细节。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并提供更具体的细节。

例: Yes, I have changed the websites I visit. For example, during university, I liked reading online novels on a specific website, but now I prefer watching videos on another platform.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法和连接词，使表达更清晰。

例: Social media websites like Facebook and Instagram are popular in my country because people enjoy following celebrities and sharing their own lives with others.

× I like visit these websites because I like to watch the content during the, uh, dinner time or lunch.

✓ I like visiting these websites because I like to watch the content during dinner time or lunch.

动词like后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示喜欢做某事，不能直接接动词原形。这里应使用'visiting'。

× Uh, I like watch it when I eat lunch because it was very funny and it uh, too sure to my lunch time.

✓ Uh, I like watching it when I eat lunch because it is very funny and it suits my lunch time.

动词like后应接动名词watching而非原形watch；此外，时态应保持一致，描述现在习惯用一般现在时。

× I liked to read the online novel in my university time, so I like to use the UH online novel website to read, but now I prefer to watch the UMM.

✓ I liked reading online novels during my university time, so I liked using the UH online novel website to read, but now I prefer watching the UMM.

动词like和prefer后应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事；此外，online novel应为复数形式online novels。

× I often visit websites which offer different content such as TV shows, movies or TV series.

✓ I often visit websites which offer different content such as TV shows, movies, or TV series.

列举多个项目时，项目之间应使用逗号分隔，且内容无误。此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× I think the social media such as Facebook or Instagram are popular in my country because people like to follow the strangers or stars life they want or and then they want to share their real life to other people in the website.

✓ I think social media such as Facebook or Instagram is popular in my country because people like to follow strangers' or stars' lives they want and then they want to share their real life with other people on the websites.

social media作为整体名词通常视为单数，故用is；strangers和stars为复数，需用复数所有格strangers'和stars'；life应为复数lives；介词用on websites更合适。

× So social media was a popular.

✓ So social media is popular.

描述当前事实时应使用一般现在时，was为过去时不合适。