Websites— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更自然、简洁并改善语法与连贯性。注意主句与从句的结构（如“such as online supermarket”应改为“such as online supermarkets”或“an online supermarket”），避免重复表达（“convenient”与后续解释重复）。可以用一到两句主题句后加一到两句具体细节，并使用连接词如“so”或“for example”来衔接。

例: I often visit online supermarkets because they make grocery shopping very convenient. For example, I can order fresh ingredients in advance and have them delivered to my home, which saves me time during busy workdays.

提案: 回答有信息，但句子结构混乱与代词使用不当（“we can pre-order and send it to my home”应为“we can pre-order and have them delivered to our homes”或“I can have them delivered to my home”）。需要一开始给出直接答案，再用一两句具体原因并用连词连接（如“because”,“so”）。注意时态和主谓一致。

例: My favourite website is an online supermarket because it lets me pre-order groceries and have them delivered to my home. This saves me a lot of time, which is ideal given my busy work schedule.

提案: 表达不够准确且语法错误较多。建议先用一句话直接回答（有或没有变化），然后用一到两句具体说明变化并用合适的连接词（例如“however”,“for example”）。注意名词与动词形式（如“there have a field of some design”不正确），用“layout”,“colour scheme”,“buttons”更恰当。

例: There haven't been any major changes to the websites I use, although the layout and colour scheme have been updated. For example, buttons are larger and the homepage looks cleaner, but the overall structure remains the same.

提案: 回答意思明确但语法与表达需要改进。注意主谓一致（“food ordering websites are very popular”）和用词（“there is very convenient”应为“they are very convenient”）。用一到两句说明原因并举例，使用连接词如“especially”或“for example”。避免口语缩写“1st”。

例: In Hong Kong, food-ordering websites are very popular because they are convenient for busy people. For example, office workers can order lunch in advance and have it delivered to their workplace, saving time during busy workdays.

× I usually visit the online shopping website such as online supermarket because it is very convenient for me to prepare the grocery and some ingredients.

✓ I usually visit online shopping websites such as online supermarkets because they are very convenient for me to buy groceries and some ingredients.

句中“the online shopping website”與“online supermarket”使用了定冠詞和單數形式，表達一般習慣時應使用複數（一些網站），並且“grocery”常用複數形式“groceries”。另外代詞需與複數主語一致，將“it”改為“they”。建議：說習慣性動作時用複數（websites/supermarkets），並注意名詞單複數一致。

× For example, I can order some ingredients in advance.

✓ For example, I can order some ingredients in advance.

此句語法正確，無需更改。提醒：動詞與主語一致，這裡主語是“I”，助動詞“can”正確。

× My favorite website is online supermarket because it is very convenient and we can pre-order and send it to my home.

✓ My favorite websites are online supermarkets because they are very convenient; we can pre-order and have items delivered to my home.

原句將一般類別說成單數“online supermarket”且使用了“we”與“my home”混用。表達習慣或類別時用複數（websites/supermarkets），並用被動或動詞短語“have items delivered”來表達“送到家”。建議：保持數的一致性並用恰當動詞短語表達送貨。

× I can save a lot of time and because of my job it is very suitable for me.

✓ I can save a lot of time, and because of my job it is very suitable for me.

原句連接詞使用混亂且兩部分結構重複，應用逗號或更自然的連接方式。更好寫法為“I can save a lot of time, and because of my job it is very suitable for me.” 建議：避免在一個句子中重複不必要的連接詞，或將句子分開使結構清晰。

× There aren't any big changes of my website, but there have a field of some design and outlook of the website have changed, for example the colour and the button.

✓ There aren't any big changes to the websites I use, but some aspects of the design and appearance have changed, for example the colour and the buttons.

原句中有多處結構和用詞錯誤：應說“changes to”而不是“changes of”，且“there have a field of”是不正確的表達；應直接說“some aspects ... have changed”。按語法使用複數“buttons”。建議：學會用“changes to”和“have changed”來表達變化，避免多餘的“There have ...”結構。

× But basically the place and the design are similar with the old one.

✓ But basically the layout and the design are similar to the old ones.

“similar”應與介詞“to”連用（similar to），而非“similar with”。另外“place”在指網站佈局時用“layout”更準確，且“old one”應改為複數“old ones”以與前述複數主語對應。建議：記住固定搭配“similar to”，注意詞彙選擇與數的一致。

× In Hong Kong, the food ordering website is very popular because there is very convenient for people, especially in work and they can order the food 1st and then send it to their office.

✓ In Hong Kong, food ordering websites are very popular because they are very convenient for people, especially at work; they can order food first and have it sent to their offices.

句中應使用複數“websites”來泛指，且“there is very convenient”用法錯誤，應為“they are very convenient”。“in work”應為“at work”。表達先訂購再送達用“order food first and have it sent to their offices”。建議：注意代詞與前文主語一致，介詞選擇（at work），以及使用被動短語表達送貨。