Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness. Try to directly state the subject you find challenging and explain why with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: I found math to be the most challenging subject at school because the calculations were difficult and required a lot of practice. Unlike other subjects, math concepts often seemed complex and abstract to me. However, I enjoyed science more because it was interesting and easier to understand.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical and vocabulary errors, making it hard to understand. Focus on giving a clear and direct response to the question. Use simple and correct sentences to explain why you like to challenge yourself, and provide a specific example if possible.

例: Yes, I like to challenge myself because it helps me grow and improve. For example, when I face difficult tasks, I try my best to complete them to prove my abilities.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more coherent. Provide specific reasons why challenges make life exciting and motivating.

例: Yes, I definitely prefer a life full of challenges because they make life more exciting and adventurous. Challenges also motivate me to work harder and achieve my goals.

提案: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to clearly explain how you handle challenges in daily life using simple and complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples if possible.

例: Usually, I don't face many challenges in daily life, but when I do, I try to face them confidently. I take on challenges to prove myself and learn from the experience.

× During my school time, I was good in studies but I hate the subject which is Matt.

✓ During my school time, I was good in studies but I hated the subject which is Math.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the speaker is talking about past school time, 'hate' should be in past tense 'hated' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'Matt' seems to be a typo for 'Math'.

× I did not like the calculations that are very difficult to do it.

✓ I did not like the calculations because they were very difficult to do.

The phrase 'to do it' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'calculations that are very difficult' should be connected properly with 'because they were very difficult' to improve clarity and grammar.

× I think it is very complex and subjective.

✓ I think it is very complex and subjective.

The word 'subjective' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'subject' or 'abstract'. However, since 'subjective' is an adjective, it is grammatically correct but semantically wrong. Since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, no change is made here.

× From all of the other subject, I have the most interesting subjective which is science and.

✓ Among all the other subjects, I find science the most interesting subject.

'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' when referring to multiple subjects. 'Subjective' is incorrect here; it should be 'subject'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, in different types of situation I like to challenge myself for when I talk about cats come to on my ego, then I fulfilled the task and complete the challenger to fight against the talker also I have. Whoa. Oh. 30 to prove myself.

✓ Yes, in different types of situations, I like to challenge myself. When I feel confident, I fulfill the task and complete the challenge to prove myself.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It contains unrelated phrases and lacks proper sentence structure. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning, fixing sentence structure errors.

× Yes Sir, I would definitely live in a life that has a lot of challenges.

✓ Yes Sir, I would definitely live a life that has a lot of challenges.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'live a life' without 'in'.

× As a challenge is a helper our life to become more adventure is also more exciting.

✓ Challenges help our life become more adventurous and exciting.

The sentence has incorrect word forms: 'helper' should be 'help', 'adventure' should be 'adventurous'. The sentence is rephrased for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× The challenges are wearing necessary part of our life.

✓ Challenges are a necessary part of our life.

'Wearing' is incorrect here; likely a typo for 'a' or 'an'. Also, 'challenges' is plural, so 'are' is correct, but 'a necessary part' is singular, so the sentence is corrected accordingly.

× Also they help other people to get motivated also motivated towards their aim.

✓ They also help other people get motivated towards their goals.

The sentence repeats 'also' unnecessarily and uses 'aim' awkwardly. The conjunction and sentence structure are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× In my daily life for most oftenly no challenges are more awkward, but sometimes some conditions are followed in my daily life as I want to prove myself so I take the challenges and.

✓ In my daily life, most often there are no awkward challenges, but sometimes certain situations arise where I want to prove myself, so I take on the challenges.

'Most oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'most often'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct adverb placement.

× To prove it.

✓ I take on the challenges to prove myself.

The fragment 'To prove it.' is incomplete. It is combined with the previous sentence to form a complete and grammatically correct sentence.