Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating why mathematics is challenging, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I think mathematics is the most challenging subject because it involves various operations like addition, subtraction, and division, as well as abstract concepts and numerous formulas that are difficult to remember over time.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding a linking word and a specific example to make it more engaging and natural.

例: Yes, I like to challenge myself because it helps me improve my skills and abilities. For instance, I often take on difficult projects at work to push my limits.

提案: Your answer is understandable but lacks fluency and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to express your opinion more naturally.

例: No, I prefer a life with fewer challenges because I value peace and rest. Challenges can make life difficult, and I would rather avoid unnecessary hardships.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and is somewhat confusing. Try to structure your response clearly with linking words and correct verb forms. Be specific about your methods to handle challenges.

例: First, I write down the challenge in my journal. Then, I think carefully to find possible solutions. If I cannot solve the problem, I try not to stress and accept the situation calmly.

× I think mathematics is the most challenging 1 becauses mathematics usually involves plus, minus, divisions, abstraction and the various kinds of formulas that cannot be remembered. For a long period of time.

✓ I think mathematics is the most challenging because mathematics usually involves addition, subtraction, division, abstraction, and various kinds of formulas that cannot be remembered for a long period of time.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'plus, minus, divisions' should be replaced with 'addition, subtraction, division' for proper noun usage. The sentence was split unnecessarily; it should be combined for clarity.

× First of all, I write it down in my journal and then I. Think about it and tries to solve it in a way that is. Able and I try to bring down the solutions for a problem.

✓ First of all, I write it down in my journal and then I think about it and try to solve it in a way that is able, and I try to bring down the solutions for a problem.

The verb 'tries' does not agree with the subject 'I'; it should be 'try'. Also, the sentence has unnecessary periods that break the flow and should be removed for correct sentence structure.

× If there is no solution then I tried to take less stress about that.

✓ If there is no solution, then I try to take less stress about that.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is' with past tense 'tried'. To maintain tense consistency, 'tried' should be changed to 'try' because the condition is present.