Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免重复和冗余。可以用更准确的词汇表达自己的感受，并且句子应简洁明了。

例: The most challenging subject for me at school was music because I am quite introverted and feel shy when performing in front of others. Therefore, learning and performing music was difficult for me.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免拼写错误，并且用连词使句子更连贯。举例时应具体且逻辑清晰。

例: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself. For example, I have gone fishing at Lake Biwa in Japan, and next time I plan to visit Lake Hibara because it has different types of fish that I really like.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法和拼写错误，表达不连贯。建议简化句子结构，注意单词拼写和语法，避免重复内容。回答应紧扣问题，内容具体且有条理。

例: Yes, I prefer a life full of challenges. For instance, I have fished at Lake Biwa in Japan, and I plan to go to Lake Hibara next time to catch different kinds of fish. Fishing is also an affordable hobby.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的短语和词汇，避免拼写错误，句子应简洁且逻辑清楚。可以用连词连接观点和理由。

例: In daily life, I deal with challenges by making small progress step by step. I believe that these small steps will eventually lead to big achievements. It requires patience and resilience to overcome difficulties.

× musical was the most challenges object for me

✓ music was the most challenging subject for me

这里'musical'应改为'music'，因为指的是学科；'challenges'应为形容词形式'challenging'，修饰'subject'；'object'应改为'subject'，因为题目问的是学科。

× because I'm in a little bit introverted and shy when performing in front of others

✓ because I'm a little bit introverted and shy when performing in front of others

'in a little bit'用法错误，应为'a little bit'表示程度副词。

× So music is really challenging for me being in performing and learning.

✓ So music is really challenging for me when performing and learning.

'being in performing'结构不正确，应改为'when performing'表示时间状语。

× I like to challenge myself up.

✓ I like to challenge myself.

'challenge oneself'后不需要加'up'，'up'用法错误。

× I have some experience go fishing at a later BY in Japan

✓ I have some experience going fishing at Lake Biwa in Japan

'go'应改为动名词'going'，表示经历；'a later BY'应为'Lake Biwa'，地名拼写错误。

× Lake Ahipara have has different type of a fish I really love.

✓ Lake Hibara has different types of fish I really love.

'have has'重复，应为'has'；'type'应为复数'types'；'a fish'应为复数'fish'表示多种鱼类。

× I like to live a lie to let it has a lot of challenges.

✓ I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges.

'lie'应为'life'；'let it has'结构错误，应为'that has'。

× I have a some experience go fishing at the lake Biwa it to Japan

✓ I have some experience going fishing at Lake Biwa in Japan

'a some'错误，应为'some'；'go'应为'going'；'it to Japan'无意义，应删除。

× the next time I'm going to lake a hibara Japan for a different kind of a fish.

✓ the next time I'm going to Lake Hibara, Japan for a different kind of fish.

'lake a hibara'应为'Lake Hibara'，首字母大写且无冠词；'a different kind of a fish'中第二个'a'多余。

× Going fishing is very cheap.

✓ Going fishing is very cheap.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× In my daily life, I usually deal with the challenges, with the small progress.

✓ In my daily life, I usually deal with challenges by making small progress.

'deal with the challenges, with the small progress'结构重复且不通顺，应改为'deal with challenges by making small progress'。

× I believe, like the small progress, every time I will lead me to bake achievement.

✓ I believe that small progress each time will lead me to big achievement.

'like the small progress'用法错误，应为'that small progress'；'bake achievement'应为'big achievement'。

× It takes patience and resilience to achieve a pickle.

✓ It takes patience and resilience to achieve a goal.

'pickle'用词错误，应为'goal'表示目标。