Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "subjects which demand a high degree of arithmetic knowledge and intellectual capacity"; instead, say "subjects that require strong math skills and critical thinking." Also, add linking words to improve coherence and provide a more personal opinion or example to enrich your response.

例: I think subjects like mathematics and science are the most challenging because they require strong math skills and critical thinking. For instance, in my experience, physics problems often need careful analysis and problem-solving, which can be quite tough.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by avoiding minor grammatical errors and making the response more concise. For example, use "try to solve them" instead of "try to solve it" when referring to multiple problems. Also, use linking words like "therefore" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Absolutely. Whenever I take a course, I try to solve the most difficult problems first. If I can't solve them, I ask the professor to explain in class so everyone can learn. I believe challenging myself is essential to deepen my knowledge.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. For example, say "too many challenges" instead of "too much challenges." Also, try to expand your answer with a linking word and a specific example to make it more engaging.

例: Not particularly. While some challenges make life interesting, too many challenges can be overwhelming and stressful. For example, dealing with constant work pressure can make it hard to enjoy daily life.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. For instance, use "handle" instead of "deal with" and add "for example" more smoothly. Also, consider explaining why you prefer to handle problems independently.

例: I usually try to handle challenges on my own because I prefer to be independent. For example, if I miss my bus, I find an alternative way to reach my destination instead of asking for help.

× I believe that subjects which demand a high degree of arithmetic knowledge and intellectual capacity to be the most difficult.

✓ I believe that subjects which demand a high degree of arithmetic knowledge and intellectual capacity are the most difficult.

The original sentence lacks a main verb for the subject 'subjects'. Adding 'are' corrects the sentence structure and properly links the subject to the predicate, resolving the singular/plural agreement and sentence structure issue.

× Whenever I take a course in my college, I try to pick out the most difficult problems from the subject and try to solve it.

✓ Whenever I take a course in my college, I try to pick out the most difficult problems from the subject and try to solve them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'problems', which is plural. Changing 'it' to 'them' ensures correct pronoun agreement with the plural noun.

× And if I'm unable to solve it, I'll ask the professor to explain it in class so that everyone gets a chance to learn difficult concepts.

✓ And if I'm unable to solve them, I'll ask the professor to explain them in class so that everyone gets a chance to learn difficult concepts.

The pronouns 'it' refer to 'problems', which is plural. Using 'them' correctly matches the plural noun and maintains consistency.

× I believe challenging oneself is necessary to deepen the knowledge in.

✓ I believe challenging oneself is necessary to deepen knowledge.

The phrase 'deepen the knowledge in' is incomplete and awkward. Removing 'the' and 'in' creates a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× However, having too much challenges can make life difficult and unenjoyable.

✓ However, having too many challenges can make life difficult and unenjoyable.

'Challenges' is a countable plural noun, so 'much' should be replaced with 'many' to correctly quantify it.