Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免重复表达，如“problem thinking”应为“problem-solving”。此外，句子结构可以更自然流畅，避免冗长。

例: I believe math is the most challenging subject at school because it involves complex calculations and advanced problem-solving. However, it is essential as it helps develop logical thinking and analytical skills.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“change myself”应为“challenging myself”，“Handing”应为“Handling”。句子未完整，需注意表达完整性和连贯性。

例: I really enjoy challenging myself, especially in my career as a lawyer. Handling difficult cases helps me develop problem-solving skills and adapt to clients' needs, which I find very rewarding. Therefore, I always welcome difficult tasks.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“I I find myself lose confidence”应为“I find myself losing confidence”。建议注意句子完整性和避免重复。

例: I don't like living a life full of challenges because it can make me feel frustrated and stressed. For example, when I face many difficulties, I find myself losing confidence and struggling to stay focused.

提案: 回答较好，但“maintain a concentration”应为“maintain concentration”。建议使用更自然的表达，丰富词汇。

例: I usually cope with small challenges by taking deep breaths to calm myself and maintain concentration on the tasks at hand. When I feel stressed, I like to exercise because it helps me relax and clear my mind.

× I think math is the most challenging subject at school because I find some of the calculation are quite complex, especially when they involve advanced problem solving.

✓ I think math is the most challenging subject at school because I find some of the calculations are quite complex, especially when they involve advanced problem solving.

这里的“calculation”应为复数形式“calculations”，因为前面用了“some of”，表示部分多个计算，名词应使用复数形式。

× I think math is really important because it helps develop problem thinking and logical thinking skills.

✓ I think math is really important because it helps develop problem-solving and logical thinking skills.

“problem thinking”不是常用表达，应改为“problem-solving”，表示“解决问题的”。这里需要用动名词形式作形容词修饰后面的名词。

× I really enjoy change myself, especially in my career as a lawyer.

✓ I really enjoy changing myself, especially in my career as a lawyer.

动词“enjoy”后应接动名词形式，故“change”应改为“changing”。

× Handing difficult cases allows me develop problem solving skills and adapt to a client's needs, which is really rewarding.

✓ Handling difficult cases allows me to develop problem-solving skills and adapt to a client's needs, which is really rewarding.

“allows me develop”缺少不定式“to”，应为“allows me to develop”。此外，“problem solving”应连写为“problem-solving”。

× Therefore, I always welcome the difficult tasks because.

✓ Therefore, I always welcome difficult tasks.

句子末尾“because”后没有内容，导致句子结构不完整，应去掉“because”使句子完整。

× I don't like living a life full of challenges because sometimes it makes me feel frustrated and stressed.

✓ I don't like living a life full of challenges because sometimes it makes me feel frustrated and stressed.

该句无语法错误，保持原句。

× For example, when I have to face a lot of difficulties, I I find myself lose confidence and it's hard to stay focused.

✓ For example, when I have to face a lot of difficulties, I find myself losing confidence and it's hard to stay focused.

“find myself lose confidence”中“lose”应改为动名词“losing”，因为“find oneself doing something”是固定表达。

× Stay focused.

✓ I try to stay focused.

“Stay focused.”是一个不完整的句子，缺少主语和谓语，改为完整句子“I try to stay focused.”更符合语法。

× I usually cope small challenges by taking deep breaths to calm myself and maintain a concentration on tasks at hand.

✓ I usually cope with small challenges by taking deep breaths to calm myself and maintain concentration on tasks at hand.

动词“cope”后应加介词“with”，且“a concentration”应去掉冠词“a”，因为“concentration”是不可数名词。

× Sometimes when I feel stressed, I like to do some exercise because it helps me relax and clean my mind.

✓ Sometimes when I feel stressed, I like to do some exercises because it helps me relax and clear my mind.

“exercise”作为不可数名词时表示锻炼的整体，复数“exercises”表示具体的锻炼动作。这里用复数更合适；“clean my mind”应改为“clear my mind”，表示“清理思绪”。