Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변에서 문법 오류와 어휘 선택이 부자연스럽습니다. 'embarrass' 대신 'embrace' 또는 'involve'를 사용하고, 'logic thinking' 대신 'logical thinking'이 적절합니다. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 하여 명확성을 높이고, 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 개선하세요.

例: I think mathematics is the most challenging subject at school because it involves complex problem-solving skills and abstract concepts that require logical thinking and practice. For example, topics like algebra and calculus can be difficult to understand without consistent effort and proper guidance.

提案: 문법 오류와 어휘 사용에 주의해야 합니다. 'learn new skill'은 'learn new skills'로 수정하고, 'boosting my computers'는 의미가 불명확하므로 적절한 표현으로 바꾸세요. 또한, 문장 간 연결어를 사용해 답변을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

例: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself because it helps me grow and learn new skills. For instance, I often set personal goals such as learning a new language and improving my fitness, which keep me motivated and focused. Facing challenges also boosts my confidence and makes me feel accomplished.

提案: 주어와 동사의 일치, 단수와 복수형 사용에 주의하세요. 'our life' 대신 'a life'가 적절하며, 'motivate'는 'motivates'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 예시를 더 구체적으로 제시하고, 문장 연결어를 활용해 답변을 명확하게 만드세요.

例: Yes, I enjoy living a life filled with challenges because they push me to grow and improve. Facing difficulties often motivates me to find creative solutions and develop new skills. For example, overcoming upcoming obstacles at work has helped me become more resilient and competent.

提案: 'this problem' 대신 'problems'로 수정하고, 'tight deadline network'는 의미가 불분명하므로 명확한 표현으로 바꾸세요. 또한, 문법 오류를 수정하고, 문장 간 연결어를 사용해 답변을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

例: I usually deal with challenges in daily life by staying calm and breaking problems down into smaller, manageable parts. For example, if I have a tight deadline, I prioritize tasks and focus on completing them one by one. This approach helps me stay organized and reduces stress.

× This is because it embarrass complex problem solving skill and abstract concept that require logic thinking and the practice.

✓ This is because it embraces complex problem-solving skills and abstract concepts that require logical thinking and practice.

'embarrass' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'embrace' meaning to include or contain. 'problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving' when used as an adjective. 'skill' and 'concept' should be plural to match 'complex' and the context. 'logic thinking' should be 'logical thinking' as 'logical' is the adjective form. 'the practice' should be 'practice' without 'the' as it is uncountable here.

× This is because it embarrass complex problem solving skill and abstract concept that require logic thinking and the practice.

✓ This is because it embraces complex problem-solving skills and abstract concepts that require logical thinking and practice.

'skill' and 'concept' are countable nouns and should be pluralized to 'skills' and 'concepts' to agree with 'complex' and the plural subject.

× This is because it embarrass complex problem solving skill and abstract concept that require logic thinking and the practice.

✓ This is because it embraces complex problem-solving skills and abstract concepts that require logical thinking and practice.

The verb 'embarrass' should be 'embraces' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'require' is correct because it refers to plural subjects 'skills and concepts'.

× This is because it embarrass complex problem solving skill and abstract concept that require logic thinking and the practice.

✓ This is because it embraces complex problem-solving skills and abstract concepts that require logical thinking and practice.

'logic thinking' is incorrect; the adjective form 'logical thinking' should be used to modify 'thinking'.

× For example, topic like algebra and calculus can be quite difficult to grasp without consistent effort and guidance.

✓ For example, topics like algebra and calculus can be quite difficult to grasp without consistent effort and guidance.

'topic' should be plural 'topics' because it refers to multiple subjects 'algebra and calculus'.

× Yes, I do enjoy challenging myself because it helps me grow and learn new skill.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy challenging myself because it helps me grow and learn new skills.

'skill' is countable and should be plural 'skills' when referring to multiple abilities.

× Facing challenges also boosting my computers and make me feel accomplished.

✓ Facing challenges also boosts my confidence and makes me feel accomplished.

'boosting' should be 'boosts' to agree with the subject. 'computers' is incorrect; likely intended word is 'confidence'. 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'Facing challenges'.

× Facing challenges also boosting my computers and make me feel accomplished.

✓ Facing challenges also boosts my confidence and makes me feel accomplished.

'boosting' and 'make' should be 'boosts' and 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'Facing challenges'.

× Yes, I do enjoy living our life filled with challenges because they push me to grow and improve.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy living my life filled with challenges because they push me to grow and improve.

'our life' is incorrect because the speaker is talking about their own life; 'my life' is appropriate.

× Facing difficulties often motivate me to find creative solution and develop new skills, for example, upcoming obstacles.

✓ Facing difficulties often motivates me to find creative solutions and develop new skills, for example, upcoming obstacles.

'solution' should be plural 'solutions' to match 'creative' and the plural context. 'motivate' should be 'motivates' to agree with singular subject 'Facing difficulties'.

× Facing difficulties often motivate me to find creative solution and develop new skills, for example, upcoming obstacles.

✓ Facing difficulties often motivates me to find creative solutions and develop new skills, for example, upcoming obstacles.

'motivate' should be 'motivates' to agree with the singular subject 'Facing difficulties'.

× I usually deal with the challenges in daily life by staying calm and breaking this problem down into smaller, manageable parts.

✓ I usually deal with challenges in daily life by staying calm and breaking the problem down into smaller, manageable parts.

'the challenges' can be 'challenges' for general statement. 'this problem' should be 'the problem' to refer back to a general problem.

× For example, if I have a tight deadline network, I prioritize tasks and focus on complete them by one by one.

✓ For example, if I have a tight deadline, I prioritize tasks and focus on completing them one by one.

'deadline network' is incorrect; 'deadline' alone is correct. 'focus on complete' should be 'focus on completing' because 'focus on' is followed by gerund. 'by one by one' should be 'one by one'.

× For example, if I have a tight deadline network, I prioritize tasks and focus on complete them by one by one.

✓ For example, if I have a tight deadline, I prioritize tasks and focus on completing them one by one.

'focus on' requires the verb in gerund form 'completing' not the base form 'complete'.

× This approach helped me stay organized and reduce stress.

✓ This approach helps me stay organized and reduce stress.

'helped' is past tense but the context suggests a general truth or habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is more appropriate.