Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法の誤りや繰り返しを避け、より自然で明確な表現を使いましょう。また、話の流れを良くするために接続詞を使い、具体的な理由を付け加えると良いです。

例: I find business negotiation the most challenging subject at my school because I am studying in France and all my courses are in English. Since my English speaking skills are not very strong, it makes understanding and participating in business classes quite difficult for me.

提案: 「umm」などの不要な言葉を減らし、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢に話す練習をしてください。

例: Yes, I like to challenge myself because I want to experience many things. For example, I plan to climb Mount Fuji and try skydiving, as I enjoy pushing my limits.

提案: 「challenging challenges」のような繰り返しを避け、正しい文法を使いましょう。より自然な表現で、自分の意見を明確に伝える練習が必要です。

例: I prefer to live a life full of challenges because I am very curious about everything. Without challenges, I don't think I can truly enjoy my life.

提案: 文法の誤りを直し、意味が明確になるように話しましょう。また、具体的な方法や理由を付け加えて、内容を豊かにしてください。

例: I usually deal with challenges by working hard because I believe I have many talents. Therefore, I practice regularly to improve myself and achieve my goals.

× At my school, business negotiation is the most challenge subject.

✓ At my school, business negotiation is the most challenging subject.

'Challenge' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'subject'. The correct adjective form is 'challenging'. This error is about using the correct adjective form to modify a noun.

× But I'm not good at speaking English well, so for me it is so difficult to take business.

✓ But I'm not good at speaking English well, so for me it is very difficult to take business.

The use of 'so difficult' is informal and less appropriate here; 'very difficult' is more suitable in this context. Also, 'take business' is unclear; it likely means 'take business courses' or 'study business' but the sentence only corrects the adverb usage.

× I I am currently studying abroad in France, so I take all courses in English.

✓ I am currently studying abroad in France, so I take all courses in English.

The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed for correct pronoun usage and sentence clarity.

× I wanna, I want to try umm a lot of things.

✓ I want to try a lot of things.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. Also, the repetition is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× I prefer I have a lot of challenging challenges in my life because I think I am very curious for everything.

✓ I prefer to have a lot of challenges in my life because I think I am very curious about everything.

'Challenging challenges' is redundant; 'challenges' alone is sufficient. Also, 'curious for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'curious about'. This addresses adjective redundancy and preposition use.

× I think I am very curious for everything.

✓ I think I am very curious about everything.

The correct preposition to use with 'curious' is 'about', not 'for'. This is a common preposition error.

× So if I don't challenging, challenging something in my life, I think I can't enjoy my life.

✓ So if I don't challenge something in my life, I think I can't enjoy my life.

'Challenging' is an adjective or verb form but here the base verb 'challenge' is needed after 'don't'. The sentence requires the base form of the verb after 'do not'.

× I think just I her work hard because I know I have a lot of talents for everything, so I have to practice and work hard to achieve some goals.

✓ I think I just have to work hard because I know I have a lot of talents for everything, so I have to practice and work hard to achieve some goals.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an extra word 'her' that makes it ungrammatical. Correct word order and removal of 'her' are necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.