Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你用更簡潔且正確的句子來表達，例如避免使用 "so much things"，改用 "many details"，並注意時態和語法的正確性。

例: I think history is the most challenging subject for me because I have to memorize many details, such as important events, dates, and the people involved.

提案: 回答中語法和用詞稍有錯誤，建議使用更自然的表達方式，並用連接詞使句子更流暢，例如使用 "when I face challenges" 和 "so that"。

例: Yes, I like to challenge myself because when I face challenges, I can discover my weaknesses and work to improve them, so that I become a better person.

提案: 你的回答語法不完整且表達不清楚。建議你使用完整句子，並清楚表達原因，避免使用 "like after" 這類不明確的詞語。

例: Yes, I like to live a life full of challenges because we only live once, and facing difficulties helps us discover our true potential.

提案: 回答結構清晰，但語法和用詞可更自然。建議使用更流暢的連接詞和自然的表達方式，例如 "assess the situation" 代替 "make myself be aware"。

例: First, I take a deep breath to calm down. Then, I assess the situation and try to find a solution, sometimes by discussing it with others.

× I think history is the most difficult subject to me because I have to memorize so much things like the events and when it was happen and who are involved in the incident, which is hard.

✓ I think history is the most difficult subject for me because I have to memorize so many things like the events, when they happened, and who was involved in the incident, which is hard.

The phrase 'so much things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should be paired with 'so many' instead of 'so much'. Also, 'when it was happen' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'when they happened' to match plural 'events' and correct past tense. 'Who are involved' should be 'who was involved' to agree with singular 'incident' and past tense.

× I think history is the most difficult subject to me because I have to memorize so much things like the events and when it was happen and who are involved in the incident, which is hard.

✓ I think history is the most difficult subject for me because I have to memorize so many things like the events, when they happened, and who was involved in the incident, which is hard.

The phrase 'when it was happen' uses incorrect tense and form. The correct past tense form is 'when they happened' to indicate completed actions in the past.

× I think history is the most difficult subject to me because I have to memorize so much things like the events and when it was happen and who are involved in the incident, which is hard.

✓ I think history is the most difficult subject for me because I have to memorize so many things like the events, when they happened, and who was involved in the incident, which is hard.

The phrase 'subject to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'subject for me' to express the subject that is difficult for the speaker.

× Yes, I do like to challenge myself because I think whenever I face challenging I can know my weakness and try to improve and make progress so that after this challenge I can become a better person.

✓ Yes, I do like to challenge myself because I think whenever I face challenges I can know my weaknesses and try to improve and make progress so that after this challenge I can become a better person.

The word 'challenging' is used incorrectly as a noun; it should be 'challenges' (plural noun). Also, 'weakness' should be plural 'weaknesses' to match the context of multiple areas to improve.

× Yes, I do like to challenge myself because I think whenever I face challenging I can know my weakness and try to improve and make progress so that after this challenge I can become a better person.

✓ Yes, I do like to challenge myself because I think whenever I face challenges I can know my weaknesses and try to improve and make progress so that after this challenge I can become a better person.

'Challenging' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun here; the correct plural noun is 'challenges'. Also, 'weakness' should be plural 'weaknesses' to refer to multiple areas.

× Yes, I do like live the life with more challenges because we only live one time and if we live in a peaceful way of life, we cannot know how much our potential is and like after.

✓ Yes, I do like to live a life with more challenges because we only live once and if we live a peaceful life, we cannot know how much our potential is and what comes after.

The phrase 'like live the life' is missing 'to' after 'like'. 'One time' should be 'once' to express frequency. 'In a peaceful way of life' is better expressed as 'a peaceful life'. The ending 'and like after' is unclear and corrected to 'and what comes after' for clarity.

× Yes, I do like live the life with more challenges because we only live one time and if we live in a peaceful way of life, we cannot know how much our potential is and like after.

✓ Yes, I do like to live a life with more challenges because we only live once and if we live a peaceful life, we cannot know how much our potential is and what comes after.

The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb 'live'. Also, 'one time' is better expressed as 'once'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× First of all, I will take a deep breath and then I will try to make myself be aware of what situation is right now and then try to get the solution to the challenges, maybe have some discussion with others.

✓ First of all, I will take a deep breath and then I will try to make myself aware of the current situation and then try to find a solution to the challenges, maybe by having some discussion with others.

The phrase 'make myself be aware of what situation is right now' is awkward; 'make myself aware of the current situation' is correct. 'Get the solution to the challenges' should be 'find a solution to the challenges'. 'Maybe have some discussion' is better as 'maybe by having some discussion' to indicate the method.