Challenges— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for naturalness.

例: I think English is the most challenging subject for me because I am not very interested in linguistics. Moreover, the grammar rules can be quite confusing, which makes learning difficult.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about your feelings or experiences.

例: I sometimes like to challenge myself, but it requires a lot of motivation and concentration. For example, when I face difficult tasks, I often feel stressed, which can be discouraging.

提案: Your response is brief and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: I do not prefer a life full of challenges because I am not competitive by nature. Furthermore, I enjoy a peaceful life without constant pressure to outperform others.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains vocabulary errors. Provide a clear topic sentence, use correct vocabulary, and add specific examples with linking words to improve coherence.

例: How I deal with challenges depends on their type. For instance, if I have a difficult but important exam, I force myself to study hard despite the stress.

× There are several subjects that have for me, but English is the hardest one.

✓ There are several subjects that are hard for me, but English is the hardest one.

The original sentence is missing a verb after 'subjects that have'. The phrase should be 'subjects that are hard for me' to correctly express the idea. This is a 'There be' issue because the sentence structure involving 'there are' and the following clause is incorrect.

× I find myself that I am not a person that really into linguistics.

✓ I find that I am not a person who is really into linguistics.

The phrase 'I find myself that' is incorrect; 'find' should be followed by a clause without 'myself'. Also, 'a person that really into' is missing the verb 'is'. The correct relative pronoun for people is 'who'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure.

× Sometimes challenging myself need a lot of motivation and concentration.

✓ Sometimes challenging myself needs a lot of motivation and concentration.

The subject 'challenging myself' is singular and requires the verb 'needs' in third person singular form. This is a modal verb usage issue related to subject-verb agreement with modal or auxiliary verbs.

× I feel like when I need to achieve some things that really hard for me, it makes me stressed.

✓ I feel like when I need to achieve some things that are really hard for me, it makes me stressed.

The phrase 'things that really hard' is missing the verb 'are' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. This is a singular and plural issue involving verb agreement with plural subjects.

× Not at all. I am a person that doesn't want to competition or beat anyone.

✓ Not at all. I am a person who doesn't want to compete or beat anyone.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'compete', not the noun 'competition'. Also, 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people. This is a modal verb usage issue and incorrect use of pronouns.

× It depends on what types of shirlenes that are first.

✓ It depends on what types of challenges there are first.

The word 'shirlenes' seems to be a misspelling of 'challenges'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and missing 'there are' to indicate existence. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure issue.

× For example if I need to take the exams and the exam is very hard but it is important for me so I would force myself to do it.

✓ For example, if I need to take an exam and it is very hard but important for me, I will force myself to do it.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation and conjunctions. 'The exams' should be 'an exam' to match singular 'it'. Also, 'would' is better replaced with 'will' to indicate future intention. This is a sentence structure error.