Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về địa điểm và hoạt động trong kỳ nghỉ.

例: Last holiday, I went to Dallas with my family. We stayed at my relatives' house, where there were many animals. We enjoyed various activities like feeding the animals and exploring the farm.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và bổ sung lý do cụ thể vì sao bạn thích kỳ nghỉ.

例: Yes, I like holidays because they give my family and me a chance to travel together. It helps us spend quality time and strengthen our relationships.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, nêu rõ ngày lễ bạn thích và giải thích lý do bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

例: My favorite public holiday is the Lunar New Year in Vietnam. It is a big festival where families gather, enjoy traditional food, and celebrate together.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các hoạt động bạn làm trong kỳ nghỉ.

例: During holidays, I usually spend time with my family and friends. We often go to coffee shops, go shopping, or sometimes stay at home and talk. Occasionally, we go to the beach or go camping.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc và bổ sung lý do cụ thể.

例: No, I don't like spending my day at home because it can be boring. I prefer hanging out with friends, chatting at coffee shops, or going camping to strengthen our relationships.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy nêu rõ sở thích của bạn và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

例: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax after working and studying hard. Taking it easy helps me recharge my energy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, nêu rõ bạn thích kỳ nghỉ như thế nào và giải thích lý do bằng câu hoàn chỉnh.

例: I prefer a peaceful holiday because I usually spend time with my family and friends. A calm environment helps me enjoy their company better.

× Last holidays I am my families have has a.

✓ Last holiday, my family and I went.

The phrase 'Last holidays' is incorrect; 'holiday' should be singular here. 'Families' should be 'family' as it refers to one group. 'Have has a' is incorrect verb usage and should be replaced with a proper past tense verb 'went'.

× Has go to a families.

✓ We went to a family.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Has go' is not a valid verb form. It should be 'We went' to indicate past action. 'Families' should be singular 'family' if referring to one family.

× Is this in Dallas city?

✓ Is this in Dallas?

The word 'city' is unnecessary after 'Dallas' as Dallas is a city name. Also, the question should be 'Is this in Dallas?' without 'city'.

× In in this family that I have a lot of animals, they have many activity with animals an with.

✓ In this family, I have a lot of animals, and they have many activities with animals.

The sentence has repeated words 'In in' and lacks proper conjunctions. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities'. The sentence needs commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× because in the holiday my families have time to to travel with.

✓ because during the holiday my family has time to travel together.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'during' is appropriate for time periods. 'Families' should be singular 'family'. 'To to' is a repetition error.

× Travel together and they can spend time with spend time together to improve.

✓ We travel together and spend time together to improve our relationships.

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive. 'They' should be 'we' to match the subject. 'Spend time with spend time together' is redundant and should be simplified.

× In my E countries have alot public holiday but I've.

✓ In my country, there are a lot of public holidays, but I have...

'E countries' is unclear; likely meant 'my country'. 'Alot' should be 'a lot'. 'Public holiday' should be plural 'public holidays'. The sentence is incomplete.

× Enjoy the Lunar New Year holiday to Mars.

✓ I enjoy the Lunar New Year holiday the most.

The phrase 'to Mars' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence structure is incomplete and needs to express preference clearly.

× This is a festival is.

✓ This is a festival.

The sentence has a repeated verb 'is'. It should be simplified to 'This is a festival.'

× Mr. big festival or Vietnam many pupil can cattle ring good family.

✓ It is a big festival in Vietnam where many people can gather with their families.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'Mr.', 'pupil', 'cattle ring'. It should be corrected to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× to hanging now go coffee, go shopping or sometime stay stay at home to talking with my family.

✓ to hang out, go to coffee shops, go shopping, or sometimes stay at home to talk with my family.

Incorrect verb forms and prepositions are used. 'Hanging now go coffee' should be 'hang out, go to coffee shops'. 'Stay stay' is repetitive. 'To talking' should be 'to talk'.

× Family end sometime go to the beach or camping.

✓ With family, and sometimes go to the beach or go camping.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper conjunctions. 'Family end' is unclear; it should be 'with family'.

× No, I think so because staying home is very boring.

✓ No, I don't think so because staying home is very boring.

The response contradicts the question. 'No, I think so' is incorrect; it should be 'No, I don't think so' to express dislike for staying at home.

× I really enjoy to hang out with friends, spend time in coffee shop to talking or sometime have camping with friends to improve relationships.

✓ I really enjoy hanging out with friends, spending time in coffee shops talking, or sometimes going camping with friends to improve relationships.

Incorrect verb forms and prepositions are used. 'Enjoy to hang out' should be 'enjoy hanging out'. 'Spend time in coffee shop to talking' should be 'spending time in coffee shops talking'. 'Have camping' should be 'going camping'.

× I prefer all leisurely holiday because I think when people have time to holiday is holiday have people to relax after her stay with work with study an I've actually desk.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because I think when people have time for a holiday, they can relax after working or studying hard.

The sentence has incorrect quantifiers and is confusing. 'All leisurely holiday' should be 'a leisurely holiday'. The rest of the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Oh, is there has question.

✓ Oh, is there a question?

The phrase 'is there has question' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'is there a question?'.

× I think I prefer an unexciting holiday because, uh, when you I usually.

✓ I think I prefer a peaceful holiday because, usually, when I...

'Unexciting' is not the correct adjective here; 'peaceful' fits better. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.