Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте правильные времена глаголов и избегайте грамматических ошибок. Также старайтесь делать ответы более связными и естественными, используя связующие слова.

例: For my last holiday, I visited Rome with my classmates as a gift for finishing school. We saw many famous sights in Rome and enjoyed an awesome party.

提案: Обратите внимание на правильное использование слов и выражений, избегайте ошибок в лексике и грамматике. Старайтесь выражать мысли ясно и логично.

例: I really enjoy holidays because they help me recharge and give me many new emotions. I love visiting new places and exploring different cities, which brings me a lot of happiness.

提案: Старайтесь избегать повторений и грамматических ошибок. Используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями.

例: I like sightseeing holidays the best because they help me explore exciting new places and learn about different cultures, which makes me feel very positive.

提案: Используйте правильные времена глаголов и уточняйте детали, чтобы сделать ответ более конкретным и естественным.

例: On holidays, I try to explore new places and learn about different cultures. For example, I visit historical sites and local markets, which give me valuable experiences and unforgettable memories.

提案: Обратите внимание на правильное использование глаголов и артиклей. Старайтесь делать предложения более плавными и связными.

例: I don't like spending my days at home because it feels boring and tiring. I prefer walking in the streets or forest with my dog, which recharges me and gives me comfort and positive emotions.

提案: Используйте правильные формы слов и грамматику. Добавляйте связующие слова для улучшения связности ответа.

例: I really prefer busy holidays when you visit many places, try local foods, take lots of photos, and see tourist sites. It's very enjoyable and memorable.

提案: Старайтесь завершать предложения и использовать более точные выражения. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

例: I prefer exciting holidays because I remember every moment and take many photos of different sights. In peaceful holidays, I tend to remember less.

× Uh, for my last holiday I visit Rome with my classmates.

✓ Uh, for my last holiday I visited Rome with my classmates.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verb 'visit' should be in the past tense 'visited' to maintain correct tense consistency.

× It was gift for our finishing school.

✓ It was a gift for our finishing school.

The noun 'gift' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× We visit a lot of sightseeing in Rome and we have an awesome party.

✓ We visited a lot of sightseeing spots in Rome and we had an awesome party.

The verbs 'visit' and 'have' should be in the past tense 'visited' and 'had' to correctly describe past events.

× We visit a lot of sightseeing in Rome and we have an awesome party.

✓ We visited a lot of sightseeing spots in Rome and we had an awesome party.

The phrase 'a lot of sightseeing' is awkward; 'a lot of sightseeing spots' or 'many sights' is more appropriate to express multiple places.

× I really enjoy holidays because it helps me to recharge my battery and gives me a lot of knew a emotions.

✓ I really enjoy holidays because they help me to recharge my battery and give me a lot of new emotions.

The subject 'holidays' is plural, so the verbs should be 'help' and 'give' without 's'. Also, 'knew' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'new'. The article 'a' before 'emotions' is unnecessary because 'emotions' is plural.

× I really enjoy a wizard knew site scene and explore new cities.

✓ I really enjoy a wonderful new sightseeing experience and exploring new cities.

The phrase 'a wizard knew site scene' is incorrect and unclear. It should be replaced with 'a wonderful new sightseeing experience' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× It's gives a lot of good emotions foreign you study here.

✓ It gives a lot of good emotions when you study here.

The contraction 'It's' (it is) should be 'It' to agree with the verb 'gives'. Also, 'foreign' is incorrect here; 'when' fits the context better.

× I really like sightseeing holiday because it's a helps me explore exciting news sites and visiting different cities, which gives me out of positive feelings.

✓ I really like sightseeing holidays because they help me explore exciting new sites and visit different cities, which gives me a lot of positive feelings.

The singular 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match the plural verb 'help'. 'News sites' is incorrect; it should be 'new sites'. 'Out of positive feelings' is incorrect; 'a lot of positive feelings' is appropriate.

× I really like sightseeing holidays because it's helps me to know about different culture and.

✓ I really like sightseeing holidays because they help me to learn about different cultures.

'It's helps' is incorrect; 'they help' agrees with the plural subject 'holidays'. 'Culture' should be plural 'cultures' to indicate variety. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.

× For example, I'm visited historical sites and locard markets and it gives me experience and unforgettable memories.

✓ For example, I visited historical sites and local markets and it gave me experience and unforgettable memories.

The phrase 'I'm visited' is incorrect; the past tense 'I visited' is correct. 'Locard' is a typo and should be 'local'. The verb 'gives' should be past tense 'gave' to match the past context.

× I don't like spend my day at home because it's really boring and tiring.

✓ I don't like to spend my day at home because it's really boring and tiring.

The verb 'like' is followed by the infinitive form 'to spend' rather than the base form 'spend' in this context.

× It recharge my battery and gives me a. Comfort and a. More positive emotions.

✓ It recharges my battery and gives me comfort and more positive emotions.

The verb 'recharge' should be 'recharges' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The articles 'a.' before 'Comfort' and 'More' are unnecessary and should be removed.

× I really prefer busy holiday when your need to go for many sides.

✓ I really prefer busy holidays when you need to go to many sites.

'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match the context. 'Your' is incorrect; it should be 'you'. 'Sides' is a typo and should be 'sites'.

× I really prefer busy holiday when your need to go for many sides.

✓ I really prefer busy holidays when you need to go to many sites.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here; it should be 'you' as the subject of the clause.

× Try local foods, take a lot of photos and visitor tourist sites.

✓ Try local foods, take a lot of photos, and visit tourist sites.

The verb 'visitor' is incorrect; it should be 'visit'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in the list for clarity.

× It's really enjoyable and memorizable.

✓ It's really enjoyable and memorable.

The word 'memorizable' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'memorable'.

× I really prefer an exciting holiday because I can remember every moment of my full holiday.

✓ I really prefer an exciting holiday because I can remember every moment of my entire holiday.

The phrase 'my full holiday' is awkward; 'my entire holiday' is more natural and correct.

× I have a lot of photos of different sightseeing and.

✓ I have a lot of photos of different sights.

The phrase 'different sightseeing' is incorrect; 'different sights' is the correct noun phrase. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.

× In a peaceful holiday, you don't memorize more.

✓ In a peaceful holiday, you don't remember as much.

The verb 'memorize' is not appropriate here; 'remember' fits better. Also, 'more' should be replaced with 'as much' to correctly compare quantities.