Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear at the end. Try to avoid repeating phrases and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your favorite holiday place.

例: I usually prefer staying at my serene home because it is my comfort zone. However, when I go on holiday, I love visiting my grandfather's home because it is peaceful and full of beautiful nature.

提案: Your answer is good but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I love holidays because after a long week of work, we need a break to refresh our mind and soul. Moreover, going somewhere during holidays is important for maintaining a healthy mental life.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please provide a clear topic sentence and explain why you like that public holiday with specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words.

例: My favorite public holiday is the IT festival in our country because it lasts for several days. During this time, we enjoy various cultural events and beautiful decorations, which make the festival very enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating ideas.

例: On holidays, I prefer to stay at home because it is my comfort place. I enjoy eating different types of food and delicious sweets, which are my favorite things to do during holidays.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid informal phrases like 'kinda'.

例: Yes, absolutely. I like spending my day at home because it is a comfortable place for me. I am very fond of my room, which feels special and comforting at the same time.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete at the end. Try to avoid repeating phrases and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I think it depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer leisurely holidays to relax, while other times I enjoy busy holidays visiting relatives and exploring new places.

提案: Your answer is good but incomplete at the end and has some grammatical errors. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating words like 'peaceful'.

例: Honestly, I prefer a peaceful holiday because I am an introvert. Calm and serene places help me refresh my mood and feel more like myself.

× There is so many.

✓ There are so many.

The subject 'many' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. In English, 'there is' is used with singular nouns and 'there are' with plural nouns.

× after a long week work we we should need a holiday to freshen up our mind and soul

✓ after a long week of work we should need a holiday to freshen up our mind and soul

The phrase 'week work' is incorrect; it should be 'week of work' to correctly express the duration. Also, 'we we' is a repetition error but not a grammar problem type listed, so not corrected here.

× in our country there is a long day during the IT festivals which I like the most

✓ in our country there is a long day during the IT festival which I like the most

The word 'festivals' is plural but the sentence refers to a single 'long day', so 'festival' should be singular to match the context. Also, 'there is' is correct here because 'a long day' is singular.

× We love to.

✓ We love it.

The sentence 'We love to.' is incomplete because 'to' requires a verb to follow. Changing it to 'We love it.' correctly uses the pronoun to refer to the festival or days mentioned.

× I prefer to not go anywhere because I love my home.

✓ I prefer not to go anywhere because I love my home.

The placement of 'to' in 'prefer to not go' is awkward. The correct form is 'prefer not to go' without splitting the infinitive 'to go'.

× which is the most favorite things of mine.

✓ which are the most favorite things of mine.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I am obsessed with my room and I kinda feel very much special and at the same time comforting place.

✓ I am obsessed with my room and I kinda feel very special and at the same time comfortable there.

'Very much special' is incorrect; 'very special' is correct. Also, 'comforting place' should be 'comfortable place' to describe a feeling. Added 'there' for clarity.

× And whenever I feel like to go anywhere like some relatives home then I like to.

✓ And whenever I feel like going anywhere, like some relatives' home, then I like to.

After 'feel like', the verb should be in the -ing form ('going'). Also, possessive form 'relatives' home' should be 'relatives' home' with apostrophe.

× It makes me feel more myself because as I am a introvert person, I like peaceful places, calm places which helps me to refresh my mood and peaceful and serene environment makes me feel.

✓ It makes me feel more like myself because I am an introverted person. I like peaceful, calm places which help me refresh my mood, and a peaceful and serene environment makes me feel good.

'More myself' should be 'more like myself'. 'a introvert person' should be 'an introverted person'. 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'places'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.