Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短且缺少细节，建议增加具体活动或感受，使回答更丰富自然。

例: I traveled to Tokyo last winter during the New Year festival holiday. It was fascinating to experience the vibrant celebrations and traditional customs there.

提案: 表达有些重复且语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意主谓一致。

例: I really enjoy holidays because they give me a chance to relax and explore new places around the world.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富细节。

例: I like the National Day holiday best because it lasts about seven days, so I can travel to distant countries with my family and enjoy quality time together.

提案: 语法和表达不够自然，建议调整句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Usually, I plan trips with my family in advance, and during the holidays, we fly abroad to completely relax and forget about our daily routines.

提案: 表达较好，但“a different novel”用词不准确，建议使用更合适的词汇并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I enjoy spending days at home because it helps my mental health. I often read novels or newly published magazines to relax.

提案: 句子结构混乱，有重复词汇，建议简化表达并注意语法。

例: I prefer busy holidays because it's hard for my big family to get together, so we make the most of every chance to meet and have a great time.

提案: 表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的短语和句型，避免直译。

例: I prefer peaceful holidays because they allow me to relax without unexpected disruptions, helping me feel more refreshed.

× I went traveling to Tokyo last winter during the New Year festival holiday.

✓ I went to Tokyo last winter during the New Year festival holiday.

动词go后面直接跟动词的-ing形式是不正确的，应该用go to + 地点。这里应使用go to Tokyo而不是go traveling to Tokyo。

× Holidays allow people to relax themselves and refresh the lifestyle and also it offer the opportunity to travel abroad to see this world.

✓ Holidays allow people to relax themselves and refresh their lifestyle and also offer the opportunity to travel abroad to see the world.

代词使用错误，'it'指代不明确且主语是复数holidays，谓语动词也应使用复数形式'offer'，同时'lifestyle'前应加物主代词'their'。

× I like National Day holidays the best because it is the longest public holidays in China and lasts around 7 days.

✓ I like National Day holidays the best because they are the longest public holidays in China and last around 7 days.

主语是复数'holidays'，谓语动词应使用复数形式，'it is'应改为'they are'，'lasts'应改为'last'。

× Usually I will in advance make plans of traveling with my family members and during the holidays we just fly to another country to totally relax ourselves without thinking anything we have experienced in daily.

✓ Usually I will make plans in advance to travel with my family members, and during the holidays we just fly to another country to totally relax ourselves without thinking about anything we have experienced daily.

介词使用错误，'make plans of traveling'应改为'make plans to travel'，'in advance'的位置应调整，'thinking anything'应改为'thinking about anything'，'in daily'应改为'daily'。

× I prefer a busy holiday because it is difficult for such a big family to reunion in for for a trip, so we have to cherish all the opportunities to meet with each other and enjoy the fantastic time.

✓ I prefer a busy holiday because it is difficult for such a big family to reunite for a trip, so we have to cherish all the opportunities to meet with each other and enjoy the fantastic time.

'reunion'是名词，句中应使用动词'reunite'，且多余的'for'应删除。

× You won't expect anything accidental to disturb your plan and I think a peaceful holiday will make us relieve ourselves more.

✓ You won't expect anything accidental to disturb your plan, and I think a peaceful holiday will help us relieve ourselves more.

'make us relieve ourselves'表达不自然，改为'help us relieve ourselves'更合适，且句子中缺少逗号连接两个并列分句。