Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to speak more clearly and organize your answer with correct sentence structure. Use specific place names correctly and avoid repetition. For example, say 'My last holiday was during the summer break in 2025. I went to a beautiful mountain area called Kirirom, where I had a lot of fun. It was my best holiday so far.'

例: My last holiday was during the summer break in 2025. I went to a beautiful mountain area called Kirirom, where I had a lot of fun. It was my best holiday so far.

提案: Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'Yes, I really like holidays because they give me time to relax and spend quality moments with my family and friends.'

例: Yes, I really like holidays because they give me time to relax and spend quality moments with my family and friends.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid unnecessary words. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, say 'My favorite public holiday is New Year's because many people in Cambodia celebrate it. It is a special time when families meet and spend time together.'

例: My favorite public holiday is New Year's because many people in Cambodia celebrate it. It is a special time when families meet and spend time together.

提案: Try to use correct verb tenses and complete your sentences. Be specific about activities and use linking words. For example, say 'During holidays, I usually make plans with my family and friends. We go outside to relax, play games, and reduce stress together.'

例: During holidays, I usually make plans with my family and friends. We go outside to relax, play games, and reduce stress together.

提案: Improve sentence clarity and avoid repeating 'random thing'. Use specific examples and linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I like spending my day at home. For example, I enjoy cooking, playing card games, and talking with my family and siblings.'

例: Yes, I like spending my day at home. For example, I enjoy cooking, playing card games, and talking with my family and siblings.

提案: Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Explain your preference clearly with reasons. For example, say 'I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax and explore the surroundings at my own pace.'

例: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax and explore the surroundings at my own pace.

提案: Try to use correct grammar and complete your sentences. Use linking words to explain your choice. For example, say 'I prefer a peaceful holiday because my family enjoys quiet activities, and it helps us relax and enjoy our time together.'

例: I prefer a peaceful holiday because my family enjoys quiet activities, and it helps us relax and enjoy our time together.

× So my last holiday I remember is probably doing like this year 2025, doing like a summer break and everyone doing my new year.

✓ So my last holiday I remember is probably this year 2025, during the summer break and New Year.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'doing' where simple present or past tense is appropriate. 'Doing like this year 2025' is ungrammatical; it should be 'this year 2025'. Also, 'everyone doing my new year' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'during the New Year'. Use simple present or past tense to describe events or times.

× We went to Kitty room, we have fun from there.

✓ We went to Kitty Room, and we had fun there.

The phrase 'have fun from there' is incorrect; 'have fun' is correct but should be in past tense 'had fun' to match 'went'. Also, 'Kitty room' should be capitalized as a proper noun 'Kitty Room'. The conjunction 'and' improves sentence flow.

× We went to the mountain and Curry room is so so beautiful.

✓ We went to the mountain, and Curry Room is so beautiful.

'Curry room' should be capitalized as 'Curry Room' if it is a place name. The phrase 'so so beautiful' is informal; 'so beautiful' is better. Also, a comma before 'and' improves clarity.

× It's my best job holiday for.

✓ It was my best holiday ever.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Job holiday' is incorrect; likely meant 'holiday'. 'For' at the end is unnecessary. The corrected sentence uses proper structure and tense.

× Yes, I really like holiday because holiday is 1 the time that you have time to spend the time with your family and your friends.

✓ Yes, I really like holidays because holidays are the time when you can spend time with your family and friends.

'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays' when speaking generally. Also, 'is 1 the time' is incorrect; it should be 'are the time'. 'Spend the time' is redundant; 'spend time' is correct.

× Holiday is the time that you can relax in from yourself like your family has special special like time together that you can spend it from holy.

✓ A holiday is the time when you can relax by yourself, and your family has special time together that you can spend during the holiday.

Incorrect prepositions 'in from yourself' and 'spend it from holy' are used. Correct prepositions are 'by yourself' and 'during the holiday'. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So the public holiday that I would like the best is the my New Year's from a sample, New Year's is the very a lot of people very like in my union, like as they stay in Cambodia is the one that family can meet each other and stay together in during my new Year.

✓ The public holiday that I like best is my New Year's. New Year's is very popular in my country, Cambodia, because it is when families can meet and stay together during the New Year.

Incorrect article usage 'the my New Year's' and awkward phrasing 'from a sample' are corrected. 'Union' is replaced with 'country' for clarity. Sentence structure is improved and unnecessary words removed.

× So for my holiday, I just really recognize my plans with my friends and my family.

✓ For my holiday, I usually make plans with my friends and family.

'Recognize my plans' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make plans'. Also, 'just really' is informal and unnecessary. Present simple tense is appropriate for habitual actions.

× So doing this, I has a plan with my family like going outside and have some break time together, playing together and reducing the stress together and also my friend too.

✓ So, I have plans with my family like going outside, having some break time together, playing together, and reducing stress together, and also with my friends.

'I has' is incorrect; it should be 'I have'. Verb forms after 'like' should be gerunds: 'going', 'having', 'playing', 'reducing'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'.

× We go, we went, we go to.

✓ We go, we went, we go to... (sentence incomplete, needs clarification).

The sentence is incomplete and inconsistent in tense. 'We go' (present), 'we went' (past), 'we go to' (present incomplete). Consistent tense and complete sentence needed.

× Yes, I really like spend my day at home as right now for example, I spend the time at home doing some random thing by myself, random thing with my family, with my sibling, playing around.

✓ Yes, I really like to spend my day at home. For example, right now I spend time at home doing random things by myself, with my family, and with my siblings, playing around.

'Like spend' should be 'like to spend'. 'Random thing' should be plural 'random things'. 'Sibling' should be plural 'siblings' if referring to more than one. Sentence structure improved for clarity.

× Like just cooking together, playing car together and talking, playing game and something.

✓ Like just cooking together, playing cards together, talking, playing games, and other activities.

'Playing car' is incorrect; should be 'playing cards'. 'Playing game' should be 'playing games'. 'Something' is vague; replaced with 'other activities' for clarity.

× So from us myself, I prefer a literary holiday as sample, like literally holiday is the time that you have more time from relaxing and you can have more time to stay in this place and exploring from everything around it and everything fun in there.

✓ As for myself, I prefer a leisurely holiday. A leisurely holiday is a time when you have more time to relax and can stay in one place to explore everything around and enjoy the fun there.

'Literary holiday' is incorrect; should be 'leisurely holiday'. 'As sample' is incorrect; should be 'for example' or omitted. 'More time from relaxing' is incorrect; should be 'more time to relax'. Sentence structure improved.

× I would prefer to like peaceful holiday, so my family as always like doing something like peaceful, doing something like moas quietly.

✓ I would prefer a peaceful holiday because my family always likes doing peaceful activities quietly.

'To like peaceful holiday' is incorrect; should be 'a peaceful holiday'. 'As always like doing something like peaceful' is awkward; corrected to 'always likes doing peaceful activities'. 'Moas' is unclear and omitted.

× They always do something quietly and they enjoy during the time.

✓ They always do things quietly and enjoy their time.

'Do something quietly' is acceptable but 'do things quietly' is more natural. 'Enjoy during the time' is incorrect; should be 'enjoy their time'.

× So I prefer it from peaceful holiday. It's one of the most enjoying life with my.

✓ So I prefer a peaceful holiday. It's one of the most enjoyable times in life with my family.

'Prefer it from peaceful holiday' is incorrect; should be 'prefer a peaceful holiday'. 'Most enjoying life with my' is incomplete and ungrammatical; corrected to 'most enjoyable times in life with my family'.