Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use the past tense correctly and provide more specific details about your holiday. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your answer more natural and complete.

例: I went to the beach last summer with my family. We enjoyed swimming and relaxing by the sea, which made the holiday very memorable.

提案: Use the present tense to talk about general preferences and avoid incomplete sentences. Provide clear reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I like holidays because they give me a chance to spend quality time with my family and relax after work.

提案: Try to give an opinion even if you are unsure. You can mention a holiday you enjoy and explain why, using complete sentences.

例: My favorite public holiday is New Year's Day because I enjoy celebrating with my family and friends.

提案: Focus on answering the question directly by describing your activities during holidays. Use correct grammar and avoid incomplete sentences. Add linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: On holidays, I usually celebrate with my family and friends. For example, during New Year's, we decorate the house with beautiful lights and enjoy special meals together.

提案: Make your sentences grammatically correct and clear. Explain why you like spending time at home and use linking words to add details.

例: Yes, I like spending my day at home because I enjoy being with my family and relaxing in a comfortable environment.

提案: Try to express a clear preference and explain your choice with reasons or examples.

例: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it helps me relax and recharge my energy.

提案: Use the correct article and provide reasons for your preference. Add supporting details to make your answer more complete.

例: I prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy trying new activities and exploring different places.

× Uh, I go to the beach in order to come with my family.

✓ Uh, I went to the beach in order to come with my family.

The question asks about the last holiday, which is a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of the present tense 'go'.

× Yes, of course, because it was great. Uh, we spent a lot of time with my family. Enjoying it?

✓ Yes, of course, because it was great. Uh, we spent a lot of time with my family. Did you enjoy it?

The phrase 'Enjoying it?' is incomplete and incorrect as a question. It should be 'Did you enjoy it?' to form a proper past tense question.

× My favorite holidays is New York because, uh, how we usually celebrate with my family and friends.

✓ My favorite holiday is New York because, uh, how we usually celebrate with my family and friends.

The subject 'holidays' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'holiday' should be singular to match 'favorite'.

× Uh, it's a fantastic and I like it because.

✓ Uh, it's fantastic and I like it because.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'fantastic' without a noun. 'Fantastic' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a' unless followed by a noun.

× The newer trees is so beautiful and.

✓ The newer trees are so beautiful.

The subject 'trees' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Yes, of course, I love my family and I love to spend to my family.

✓ Yes, of course, I love my family and I love to spend time with my family.

The phrase 'spend to my family' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'with' and the object 'time' is needed after 'spend' to complete the expression.

× I prefer exciting holiday.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday.

The noun 'holiday' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'an' before it when modified by the adjective 'exciting'.