Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยลดคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็นและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น การใช้ tense และคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และลื่นไหลมากขึ้น

例: I went to the beach for my last holiday. I live in Phuket, which is in the south of Thailand. Phuket has many beautiful beaches and stunning places. I really enjoy relaxing there and watching the sunset.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและลื่นไหลมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมกับบริบท

例: Yes, I like holidays because I can visit my friends, go on trips, and do some shopping. Also, holidays help me relax and save energy for the next workday.

提案: ควรปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล รวมถึงเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น

例: My favorite public holiday is Mother's Day in Thailand. It is a special day when I am happy to spend time with my family and give presents to my mom.

提案: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจนเพื่ออธิบายกิจกรรมในวันหยุดอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: On my holidays, I usually wake up early, clean my room, wash the dishes, and then get ready before going out shopping.

提案: ควรปรับประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจนในการอธิบายเหตุผล

例: Yes, I like to spend my day at home during rainy days because it is not convenient to go outside. Also, staying at home helps me avoid accidents.

提案: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและโครงสร้างประโยคที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

例: I prefer a leisurely holiday rather than a busy one. I feel uncomfortable when there are too many people outside, so I like to relax quietly.

提案: ควรปรับประโยคให้ถูกต้องและลื่นไหล รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: I prefer a peaceful holiday because work is busy. It helps me relax, recharge my energy, and spend quality time with my family.

× The city have very have uh, too many beaches and stunning uh places I enjoy and realizing when I stay at the beach and see the sunset.

✓ The city has very many beaches and stunning places I enjoy and realize when I stay at the beach and see the sunset.

The subject 'city' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'very have uh, too many' is incorrect; 'very many' is the correct quantifier for countable plural nouns like 'beaches'.

× My last holiday I went to the beach.

✓ During my last holiday, I went to the beach.

The sentence is understandable but lacks proper structure. Adding 'During' clarifies the time frame. The verb 'went' is correctly in past tense for the past event.

× I live in South of Thailand in Phuket.

✓ I live in the south of Thailand, in Phuket.

When referring to regions, 'the' is needed before 'south'. Also, a comma helps separate the city from the country region.

× I like holiday because I spend this day to visit my friend, to go trip and to shopping and to make relax and save energy for work day after.

✓ I like holidays because I spend these days visiting my friends, going on trips, shopping, relaxing, and saving energy for the workday after.

'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to generalize. 'This day' should be 'these days' for plural. The verbs after 'to' should be in gerund form without 'to' when listing activities. 'Make relax' is incorrect; 'relaxing' is correct. 'Work day after' should be 'workday after'.

× I like Mother's Day in Thailand have public day on Mother's Day, so I happy to stay with together in my family and to bring the present to my mom.

✓ I like Mother's Day in Thailand because it is a public holiday, so I am happy to stay together with my family and bring a present to my mom.

'Have public day' is incorrect; it should be 'it is a public holiday'. 'I happy' needs the verb 'am'. 'Stay with together' is redundant; 'stay together with' is correct. 'The present' should be 'a present' as it is not specific.

× I watches, uh, dishes and uh, watch toilet and then, uh, before, before noon, I set up and make up and uh, go to outside to shopping.

✓ I wash dishes and clean the toilet, and then before noon, I get ready and go outside to shop.

'I watches' is incorrect; it should be 'I wash'. 'Watch toilet' is incorrect; 'clean the toilet' is correct. 'Set up and make up' is unclear; 'get ready' is better. 'Go to outside to shopping' should be 'go outside to shop'.

× Yes, I like spend my day at home during rainy day because it's not convenient to go outside and to prevent accident I better I've preferred to stay at home.

✓ Yes, I like to spend my day at home during rainy days because it's not convenient to go outside, and to prevent accidents, I prefer to stay at home.

'Like spend' should be 'like to spend'. 'Rainy day' should be plural 'rainy days'. 'To prevent accident' should be 'to prevent accidents'. 'I better I've preferred' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is correct.

× I prefer literally rather than busy holiday I.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday rather than a busy one.

'Literally' is an adverb and misused here; the correct adjective is 'leisurely'. 'Busy holiday I' is ungrammatical; it should be 'a busy one'.

× I would say I'm inconvenient if I go outside but busy holiday too many people there so make me uncomfortable.

✓ I would say I feel uncomfortable if I go outside because busy holidays have too many people, which makes me uncomfortable.

'I'm inconvenient' is incorrect; 'I feel uncomfortable' is correct. 'Busy holiday too many people there' is ungrammatical; it should be 'busy holidays have too many people'.

× I prefer a peaceful holiday because uh, busy at work, uh, make me relaxing and recharge energy on that day and sit there together with family.

✓ I prefer a peaceful holiday because being busy at work makes me want to relax and recharge my energy on that day and sit together with my family.

'Busy at work' needs a subject and verb, so 'being busy at work' is correct. 'Make me relaxing' is incorrect; 'makes me want to relax' is better. 'Sit there together with family' should be 'sit together with my family'.