Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng lặp lại (ví dụ: 'an an amazing'). Bạn nên chú ý tránh lỗi lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I went to Hut Long Bay with my family. During the trip, I enjoyed swimming, sunbathing, and tasting the local cuisine. It was an amazing experience because the weather was perfect for relaxation, and the scenery was truly picturesque.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'they gave me' nên là 'they give me', 'emerging' nên là 'immersing'). Bạn nên hoàn thành câu và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I really enjoy holidays because they give me the opportunity to escape from my daily routine and reduce stress. I also like trying local cuisines and immersing myself in nature, which makes me feel refreshed.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và kết thúc đột ngột. Bạn nên hoàn thành ý tưởng và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I like the Lunar New Year holiday the best because it's a special time when families come together to celebrate. We enjoy delicious meals, exchange gifts, and give red envelopes. This creates a warm and cozy atmosphere that brings everyone closer.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu dấu câu. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu và sử dụng dấu câu phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: On holidays, I usually like relaxing and spending quality time with my family and friends. For example, I often go to the beach with my family during summer vacations or enjoy watching movies and eating out, which makes me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Bạn có thể thêm một câu kết nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I like staying at home because I can do whatever I want, such as watching my favorite movies and eating popcorn. However, I also enjoy traveling to explore different cultures and experience new things.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng phần cuối không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại và hoàn thiện câu trả lời để rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to unwind and recharge. For example, I often spend most of my time lying on the beach and drinking coconut water during summer vacations. I find busy holidays too hectic for me.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và kết thúc không tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không phù hợp và hoàn thiện câu trả lời để tự nhiên hơn.

例: I would prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy outdoor activities like volleyball, basketball, and swimming. These activities are entertaining and help me relax while staying active and learning new skills.

× Yes, I'm really into vacations because they gave me the opportunities to escape from my daily life, reduce stress and I also like trying local cuisines and emerging in nature which makes my.

✓ Yes, I'm really into vacations because they give me the opportunities to escape from my daily life, reduce stress and I also like trying local cuisines and immersing in nature which makes me happy.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'gave' when referring to a general truth or habitual action, which requires the present tense 'give'. Also, 'emerging' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'immersing' to express being involved deeply in nature. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.

× I also like trying local cuisines and emerging in nature which makes my.

✓ I also like trying local cuisines and immersing in nature, which makes me happy.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'makes my'. It needs a proper object to complete the thought. Also, 'emerging' is incorrect; the correct word is 'immersing'. The sentence structure must be complete to convey the intended meaning.

× We enjoy meals, exchange gifts and give red envelopes. This creates a warm and cozy atmosphere which makes.

✓ We enjoy meals, exchange gifts and give red envelopes. This creates a warm and cozy atmosphere which makes us feel happy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'which makes' without specifying what it makes. It needs completion to be grammatically correct and clear.

× On holidays, I usually like relaxing and spending quality time with my family and friends For example, I often go to the beach with my family during summer vacations or enjoy watching movies and eating out, which makes me feel relaxed and.

✓ On holidays, I usually like relaxing and spending quality time with my family and friends. For example, I often go to the beach with my family during summer vacations or enjoy watching movies and eating out, which makes me feel relaxed and happy.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation between two independent clauses. Also, it ends abruptly with 'makes me feel relaxed and' without completing the thought. Proper punctuation and sentence completion are necessary.

× I often spend most of time lying on the beach and drinking coconut during summer vacations.

✓ I often spend most of the time lying on the beach and drinking coconut during summer vacations.

The phrase 'most of time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'most of the time' to indicate the majority of the time period.

× I think a busy holiday can be fast as me.

✓ I think a busy holiday can be as fast as me.

The sentence is missing the word 'as' before 'fast' to form the correct comparative structure 'as fast as'. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I find them really entertaining and relax while still being active and gain my knowledge.

✓ I find them really entertaining and relaxing while still being active and gaining knowledge.

The sentence mixes verb forms incorrectly. 'Relax' should be 'relaxing' to match 'entertaining', and 'gain' should be 'gaining' to maintain parallel structure. Also, 'my knowledge' is better expressed simply as 'knowledge' in this context.