Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và từ vựng để trở nên tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'stay as good lobbies' (câu này không rõ nghĩa). Hơn nữa, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn.

例: On my last holiday, I visited Danang City with my family for a week. We stayed at a nice hotel for four days. After that, I went to my grandmother's house to take care of her.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng số nhiều đúng (holidays), thì động từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'help unforgettable memories'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I really like holidays because they help me feel relaxed and reduce stress after working hard. Besides, I can create unforgettable memories with my family in different places.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ 'a test' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp tên ngày lễ và giải thích rõ ràng, sử dụng thì đúng và câu có cấu trúc hợp lý hơn.

例: My favorite public holiday is Tet, the Vietnamese New Year. During this time, we cook traditional food and spend quality time with friends and family, which helps strengthen our relationships.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì số nhiều và danh từ đúng (landscapes, restaurants). Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn, sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

例: On holidays, my family usually travels together to visit different cities. We explore famous landmarks and enjoy meals together at well-known restaurants.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng, tránh lỗi như 'reduce that' và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để ý nghĩa rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

例: I prefer going out with my friends rather than spending the whole day at home because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress after a long day of work.

提案: Câu trả lời cần hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'help' thay vì 'helps'. Bạn nên kết thúc câu đầy đủ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer a quiet holiday because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress. During this time, I don't think about work at all.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ đúng (peaceful thay vì beautiful holiday) và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer a peaceful holiday because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress. During the holiday, I can forget about work and enjoy my time fully.

× We stay as good lobbies for four days.

✓ We stayed at a good hotel lobby for four days.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'stayed' instead of 'stay'. Also, 'lobbies' is incorrect here; it should be 'hotel lobby' or simply 'hotel'.

× Then I visit my grandmother house to take care of her.

✓ Then I visited my grandmother's house to take care of her.

The action happened in the past, so 'visit' should be 'visited'. Also, possessive form 'grandmother's house' is needed to indicate ownership.

× I really like holiday because it help me feel relaxed and reduce stress after working all day.

✓ I really like holidays because they help me feel relaxed and reduce stress after working all day.

'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to generalize the statement. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with the plural subject. Verbs 'help' and 'reduce' should agree with plural subject 'holidays'.

× Besides, I can help unforgettable memories with my family in another place.

✓ Besides, I can create unforgettable memories with my family in another place.

The verb 'help' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'create' to express making memories. 'Unforgettable' is an adjective correctly used to describe 'memories'.

× The public holiday I like best is a test because in this time we can cook traditional food and have unforgettable memories with my friend and family.

✓ The public holiday I like best is Tet because during this time we can cook traditional food and create unforgettable memories with my friends and family.

'a test' is a misspelling of 'Tet', a Vietnamese holiday. 'In this time' should be 'during this time' for correct preposition use. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'family'. 'Have' should be 'create' to better express making memories.

× It's improve my relationship.

✓ It improves my relationships.

'It's' (it is) should be followed by the verb in third person singular 'improves'. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to indicate multiple relationships.

× We visit famous landscape in another city and we eat together in famous restaurant.

✓ We visit famous landscapes in another city and eat together in famous restaurants.

'Landscape' and 'restaurant' should be plural to indicate multiple places. Also, 'eat' does not need 'we' repeated; it can be omitted for smoother sentence.

× I like going out with my friends rather than spend all day at home because it help me feel relaxed and reduce that after working all day besides.

✓ I like going out with my friends rather than spending all day at home because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress after working all day.

'Spend' should be 'spending' to match 'rather than' structure. 'Help' and 'reduce' should be 'helps' and 'reduces' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Reduce that' is incorrect; it should be 'reduces stress'. 'Besides' is misplaced and removed for clarity.

× I like a quiet holiday because it help me feel relaxed and reduce stress and I don't think about working and.

✓ I like a quiet holiday because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress, and I don't think about work.

'Help' and 'reduce' should be 'helps' and 'reduces' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Working and' is incomplete; corrected to 'work' for clarity.

× I prefer beautiful holiday because it help me feel relaxed and reduce stress. During the holiday I can forget about work and.

✓ I prefer a peaceful holiday because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress. During the holiday, I can forget about work.

'Beautiful holiday' is not appropriate here; 'peaceful holiday' fits the context better. 'Help' and 'reduce' should be 'helps' and 'reduces' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence ending with 'and' is incomplete and corrected.