Holidays— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、内容が休日の過ごし方として少し限定的で、詳細や感想が不足しています。より具体的に休日の活動やその理由を述べると良いでしょう。

例: For my last holiday, I went to the shopping mall near my house to buy ingredients because I enjoy cooking. I made a delicious cream stew, which made the holiday very enjoyable.

提案: 回答は簡潔ですが、理由が単純で繰り返しもあります。より多様な理由や感情を加え、文をつなげる表現を使うと自然になります。

例: Yes, I love holidays because they give me a chance to relax and watch movies all day, which helps me unwind from work stress.

提案: 回答は主題に合っていますが、文法ミスと不自然な表現があります。接続詞の使い方を改善し、理由をもう少し詳しく述べると良いです。

例: I like Mother's Day and Father's Day the best because they provide special opportunities to show my appreciation and gratitude to my parents.

提案: 回答に繰り返しがあり、文が途切れています。文をつなげて流れを良くし、具体的な理由や感想を加えると効果的です。

例: On holidays, I usually watch movies, especially romance and action genres, because they make me feel happy and excited.

提案: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法ミスと語彙の繰り返しがあります。より自然な表現と多様な語彙を使うと良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I prefer spending my time at home rather than going outside because it helps me avoid noisy environments like traffic and advertisements.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確にどちらを好むか答え、趣味や理由を整理して述べる必要があります。

例: I prefer a busy holiday because I enjoy snowboarding in Nagano Prefecture, which is a great way to stay active and have fun.

提案: 回答は内容が明確ですが、文法ミスと語順の問題があります。より自然な英語表現に直し、理由を簡潔に述べると良いです。

例: I usually prefer peaceful holidays rather than exciting ones because I am often tired from work and want to relax and recharge.

× I made cream Stew and it's so delicious.

✓ I made cream stew and it was so delicious.

The sentence describes a past event, so the adjective 'delicious' should be in the past tense context 'was' to match the past action 'made'.

× I can watch movies all days.

✓ I can watch movies all day.

The phrase 'all days' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'all day' to indicate the entire day.

× I like Mother's Day or Father's Day the best because.

✓ I like Mother's Day or Father's Day the best because they are opportunities to show my appreciation to my mother or father.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It needs a complete clause after 'because' to explain the reason.

× It is opportunities for showing my appreciation to my mother or father.

✓ They are opportunities to show my appreciation to my mother or father.

The subject should be plural 'They' to agree with 'opportunities', and 'for showing' should be 'to show' for correct infinitive usage.

× They make me. They make me feel happy and excited.

✓ They make me feel happy and excited.

The first sentence 'They make me.' is incomplete and redundant; it should be combined into one complete sentence.

× I prefer spend my time at home rather than going outside because I want to escape from some noises such as traffic and advertising noise.

✓ I prefer to spend my time at home rather than going outside because I want to escape from noises such as traffic and advertising noise.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to spend'. Also, 'some noises' is better as 'noises' in this context.

× one of my hobby is go going snowboarding to Nagano Prefecture.

✓ one of my hobbies is going snowboarding in Nagano Prefecture.

The phrase should be 'one of my hobbies' (plural), and 'going snowboarding' is the correct gerund form. Also, 'in' is the correct preposition for location.

× They're so good part of snow.

✓ They are a great part of the snow season.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. A clearer expression is needed to convey the intended meaning.

× I usually choose a peaceful holidays rather than exciting holiday because I'm so tired due to work dates so I want to feel relaxed and refreshed for holidays.

✓ I usually choose peaceful holidays rather than exciting holidays because I'm so tired due to work days, so I want to feel relaxed and refreshed during holidays.

The singular/plural forms should be consistent: 'peaceful holidays' and 'exciting holidays'. Also, 'work dates' should be 'work days', and 'for holidays' is better as 'during holidays'.