Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免重复和断句不清。可以尝试用简单完整的句子表达观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: No, I don't keep plants at home because I find it challenging to take care of them. Although I love plants, I prefer to admire them rather than take care of them myself.

提案: 回答中有词汇使用错误（如“gruesome”应为“grow”），句子结构不完整且表达不清晰。建议加强词汇准确性，使用正确的动词，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

例: When I was a child, I grew roses in my backyard because I really loved them. Taking care of the roses helped me learn patience. Although the roses eventually died, it was a valuable experience.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议使用完整句子表达观点，避免断句和不连贯。可以具体说明学到的技能，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: I know a little about growing plants because my grandparents are good at it, especially flowers and trees. They have taught me skills such as how to water plants correctly.

提案: 回答中有许多语法和表达错误，句子不完整且不连贯。建议用完整的句子表达观点，避免重复和断句错误，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: No, Chinese people don't usually send plants as gifts because many people don't know how to take care of them. Receiving a plant might cause stress. However, plants may be given on special occasions.

× No, I don't keep plants at home because I'm not very good at taking care of their.

✓ No, I don't keep plants at home because I'm not very good at taking care of them.

这里的 'their' 是错误的代词形式，应该用宾格代词 'them' 来指代前面的 'plants'。代词用法错误会导致句子不通顺。

× Keeps the plants and also I love plants.

✓ I keep plants, and also I love plants.

句子缺少主语，'Keeps' 形式错误，应改为 'I keep'，使句子完整且符合语法。

× I prefer to.

✓ I prefer to admire them rather than take care of them myself.

句子不完整，缺少宾语和后续内容，需补充完整表达意思。

× Admired and rather than take care of them myself.

✓ I prefer to admire them rather than take care of them myself.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且 'Admired' 用法错误，应为动词原形 'admire'。

× When I was a child, I once gruesome roses on my backyard because I really love roses, they are beautiful.

✓ When I was a child, I once grew roses in my backyard because I really love roses; they are beautiful.

'gruesome' 是形容词，错误使用，应为动词 'grew' 的过去式。'on my backyard' 应为 'in my backyard'，介词用法错误。

× When I was a child, I once gruesome roses on my backyard because I really love roses, they are beautiful.

✓ When I was a child, I once grew roses in my backyard because I really love roses; they are beautiful.

介词 'on' 用于表面，种植应使用 'in'，表示在某个区域内。

× And taking care of their helps me to learn, be more patient.

✓ And taking care of them helps me to learn to be more patient.

'their' 用法错误，应为宾格代词 'them'。此外，'learn, be more patient' 结构不完整，需加 'to' 连接。

× Although unfortunately the roses died but this is the approach.

✓ Although unfortunately the roses died, this was a valuable experience.

句子结构混乱，'although' 和 'but' 不应同时使用，且 'this is the approach' 表达不清，应改为更合适的表达。

× I know a little bit about green plants because my grandparents are really good as green plants, specially flowers and trees and they have told me how to.

✓ I know a little bit about green plants because my grandparents are really good at growing green plants, especially flowers and trees, and they have told me how to do it.

'good as green plants' 用法错误，应为 'good at growing green plants'。句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。

× They have told me son skills such as how to water the plants correctly.

✓ They have taught me some skills, such as how to water the plants correctly.

'son skills' 拼写错误，应为 'some skills'。

× I think. This.

✓ I think this is helpful.

句子不完整，需补充谓语和宾语使其完整。

× No, not really. A sink. Looks This is because most people don't know how to take care of the plants correctly they may feel stressed when they receive a gift, when they receive a plant as a gift and.

✓ No, not really. I think this is because most people don't know how to take care of plants correctly; they may feel stressed when they receive a plant as a gift.

句子中 'A sink. Looks This' 无意义，应删除或改正。句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× Maybe in special occasions.

✓ Maybe only on special occasions.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达。