Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding hesitation and making the sentence more fluent and natural. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'because it provides a kind of a. Calmer energy', you can say 'because they create a calming atmosphere and also help purify the air.'

例: Yes, definitely. I have various kinds of plants both in my garden and bedroom because they create a calming atmosphere and also help purify the air.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'Z plant' without explanation. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'My favorite plants were snake plants and ZZ plants because they looked very pretty, and I used them to decorate my bedroom.'

例: When I was young, I used to plant a lot. My favorite plants were snake plants and ZZ plants because they looked very pretty, and I used them to decorate my bedroom.

提案: Your answer shows understanding but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, 'Although I don't know much, I have been planting since I was young. I know that plants need a lot of care and attention; for instance, some require daily watering, while others need water less frequently.'

例: Although I don't know much, I have been planting since I was young. I know that plants need a lot of care and attention; for instance, some require daily watering, while others need water less frequently.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, 'Yes, definitely. Plants are a popular gift in China. I have personally given plants that I grew in my garden to many friends because I think it's a thoughtful way to show love and affection, rather than just buying a gift.'

例: Yes, definitely. Plants are a popular gift in China. I have personally given plants that I grew in my garden to many friends because I think it's a thoughtful way to show love and affection, rather than just buying a gift.

× I have various kinds of plants in my garden as well as bedroom because it provides a kind of a. Calmer energy and also purifies the air.

✓ I have various kinds of plants in my garden as well as the bedroom because they provide a kind of calmer energy and also purify the air.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'bedroom' to specify the particular room. Also, 'plants' is plural, so the verb should be 'provide' and 'purify' to agree in number. 'A kind of a calmer energy' is awkward; 'a kind of calmer energy' is better.

× When I was young I used to plant a lot and my favorite was a snake plant and Z plant because it used to look very pretty and I also used it in my bedroom as a decorator.

✓ When I was young, I used to plant a lot and my favorites were a snake plant and a Z plant because they used to look very pretty and I also used them in my bedroom as decorations.

The subject 'favorites' is plural, so 'was' should be 'were'. Also, 'snake plant and Z plant' are two plants, so 'they' and 'used them' are correct. 'Decorator' is a noun meaning a person; 'decorations' is the correct noun for objects used to decorate.

× Some plants can be watered daily and some plants need to water just one.

✓ Some plants can be watered daily and some plants need to be watered just once.

The phrase 'need to water just one' is incorrect. It should be 'need to be watered just once' to correctly use the passive form and express frequency.

× Yes, definitely, because plant can be a form of gift so people can send it and me myself I have send a lot of friends, the plant I have grown in my garden itself.

✓ Yes, definitely, because a plant can be a form of gift so people can send it and I myself have sent a lot of friends the plants I have grown in my garden.

The noun 'plant' needs the indefinite article 'a'. The phrase 'me myself I have send' is incorrect; it should be 'I myself have sent'. Also, 'send' should be past participle 'sent' after 'have'. 'The plant' should be plural 'the plants' to match 'a lot of friends'.