Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“didn't complain”应为“don't keep”，以及“three or three other roommates”应为“three other roommates”。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: No, I don't keep plants at home because I live in a university dormitory with three other roommates, and there is not enough space for plants.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“don't grow”应为“didn't grow”，且表达有些重复和不连贯。建议你用过去时态直接回答问题，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Actually, I didn't grow any plants when I was young because I was busy with my school assignments. My mother took care of the plants at home because she liked them very much.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“different kind of plan”应为“different kinds of plants”，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I know a little about growing plants. Different kinds of plants have different habits, which means you need to water them at different times and use different methods to take care of them.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“open a new shop”应为“opens a new shop”，“show our congratulation”应为“show our congratulations”。建议使用正确的语法和更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts on many occasions. For example, if a friend opens a new shop, we send plants to congratulate them. Also, when a friend is sick in the hospital, we usually send flowers.

× No, I didn't complain at my dormitory.

✓ No, I don't keep plants at my dormitory.

The student intended to say they do not keep plants, but used 'didn't complain' which is incorrect and unrelated. The verb should be in present tense to match the question about current habits.

× I share a dormitory with three or three other roommates, so I don't have many place for to plant plants.

✓ I share a dormitory with three or four other roommates, so I don't have many places to plant plants.

'Place' should be plural 'places' because it refers to multiple spots. Also, 'for to plant plants' is incorrect; it should be 'to plant plants' without 'for'.

× So it's hard for me to keep plants at dormitory.

✓ So it's hard for me to keep plants in the dormitory.

The correct preposition for locations like 'dormitory' is 'in' rather than 'at'. Also, 'the dormitory' is more natural here.

× Actually, when I was young, I don't grow any plants because at that time I'm busy with my assignment.

✓ Actually, when I was young, I didn't grow any plants because at that time I was busy with my assignments.

The sentence refers to past events, so verbs should be in past tense: 'didn't grow' and 'was busy'. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' as students usually have multiple tasks.

× You know, in China, students always have a lot of assignment to do and I'm in my home.

✓ You know, in China, students always have a lot of assignments to do and I'm at home.

'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to indicate multiple tasks. Also, the correct preposition is 'at home' not 'in my home' in this context.

× My mom will plan, will take care of the plant and she like the plant very much.

✓ My mom would plan and take care of the plants, and she likes the plants very much.

'Will' is not appropriate here; 'would' fits better to describe habitual past actions. Also, 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with third person singular subject 'she'. 'Plant' should be plural 'plants' to match context.

× Actually, when I was young, I don't grow any plants because at that time I'm busy with my assignment.

✓ Actually, when I was young, I didn't grow any plants because at that time I was busy with my assignments.

The sentence refers to past events, so present tense verbs 'don't grow' and 'I'm busy' are incorrect; they should be past tense 'didn't grow' and 'was busy'.

× Yeah, maybe I've known a little bit such as different kind of plan have its different habits that means you need to water it in different time, so it will have different method to take care of different plants.

✓ Yeah, maybe I know a little bit, such as different kinds of plants have different habits, which means you need to water them at different times, so there are different methods to take care of different plants.

'I've known' is incorrect here; present simple 'I know' fits better. 'Different kind of plan' should be 'different kinds of plants' (plural). 'Its' should be 'their' to agree with plural 'plants'. 'In different time' should be 'at different times'. 'Method' should be plural 'methods'.

× If your friend open a new shop, we will definitely send the plant to show our congratulation to her and also give my friend get sick in the hospital, we will send flowers.

✓ If your friend opens a new shop, we will definitely send plants to show our congratulations to her, and also if my friend gets sick in the hospital, we will send flowers.

'Open' should be 'opens' for third person singular. 'The plant' should be 'plants' as a general gift. 'Congratulation' should be plural 'congratulations'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Give my friend get sick' is incorrect; it should be 'if my friend gets sick'.