Part 1
試験官
Do you keep plants at home?
受験者
Yes, I do keep plums at home. My mom really likes plums so she grows some beautiful flowers on the balcony and I have learned many planting skills from her. I find it very interesting because taking care of plants helps helps me relax and makes our home look more lovely.
試験官
What plant did you grow when you were young?
受験者
Well, when I was a child I tried to grow a rose plant on our balcony because my mom really likes roses. She taught me how to take care of it properly, such as watching it regularly and making sure it got enough sunlight. I enjoyed learning how to nurture the plant and.
試験官
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
受験者
Of course, I know some basic skills about growing plants. For example, watering them regularly and giving them fertilizer are very important because water and nutritions are essential for their growth. I learned these skills from my mother, who taught me how to take good care of different kinds of plants.
試験官
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
受験者
Actually, it's not very common for Chinese people to stand plants as gifts. Instead, they generally prefer to give flowers or other special items because flowers are considered more symbolic and suitable for celebration. For example, during festivals or birthdays flower are often chosen which price good.
× Yes, I do keep plums at home.
✓ Yes, I do keep plants at home.
这里的单词“plums”应为“plants”,因为题目问的是“plants”,而非“plums(李子)”,属于单复数使用错误。
× I find it very interesting because taking care of plants helps helps me relax and makes our home look more lovely.
✓ I find it very interesting because taking care of plants helps me relax and makes our home look lovelier.
“helps helps”重复,应去掉一个“helps”。“more lovely”应改为比较级“lovelier”,因为是比较两个状态。
× I enjoyed learning how to nurture the plant and.
✓ I enjoyed learning how to nurture the plant.
句子末尾多了“and”导致句子结构不完整,应去掉。
× water and nutritions are essential for their growth.
✓ water and nutrition are essential for their growth.
“nutritions”不可数名词,应使用单数形式“nutrition”。
× Actually, it's not very common for Chinese people to stand plants as gifts.
✓ Actually, it's not very common for Chinese people to send plants as gifts.
“stand plants”是错误搭配,应为“send plants”,即“送植物”。
× during festivals or birthdays flower are often chosen which price good.
✓ During festivals or birthdays, flowers are often chosen which have good prices.
“flower”应为复数“flowers”,且句子缺少逗号和谓语动词,需调整为完整句子。