Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'can't like' nên là 'like', 'keeping plans' nên là 'keeping plants'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I like keeping plants at home because they help decorate my space and relax me after a hard day at work. Taking care of them is one of my favorite hobbies.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về loại cây bạn đã trồng.

例: When I was young, I grew some vegetables like tomatoes and lettuce. I used to pick them and give them to my mother to cook dinner.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác ('planes' thay vì 'plants', 'wrote some kind of brand' không rõ nghĩa). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng.

例: I don't know much about growing plants, but I have tried growing easy ones like vegetables and flowers. Usually, it takes about a month to see results.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng ('plants of flour' nên là 'flower plants'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I believe Chinese people do send plants as gifts. In Vietnam, we often give flower plants as presents during housewarming celebrations.

× Yes, I can't like keeping friends at home.

✓ Yes, I can't like keeping plants at home.

The student mistakenly used 'friends' instead of 'plants', which is a pronoun/reference error. The question is about plants, so the pronoun should refer to plants, not friends.

× For me, keeping plans at home is a way to decorate my home and after a hard working day, my favorite activity is take care of my friends sometime.

✓ For me, keeping plants at home is a way to decorate my home and after a hard working day, my favorite activity is to take care of my plants sometimes.

The student used 'plans' instead of 'plants' (spelling error) and 'friends' instead of 'plants' again. Also, 'take care' needs 'to' before it to form the infinitive. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× When I was young I grow some kind of vegetable.

✓ When I was young I grew some kinds of vegetables.

The verb 'grow' should be in past tense 'grew' to match the past time frame. Also, 'some kind of vegetable' should be plural 'some kinds of vegetables' to indicate multiple types.

× For example, I will show many character cheese and when I collect them I give it to I got fish to my mother and make the dinner.

✓ For example, I would show many types of vegetables and when I collected them, I gave them to my mother to cook dinner.

The original sentence is unclear and contains multiple errors: 'will show' is incorrect tense, 'character cheese' is unclear and likely a mistranslation, 'I give it to I got fish' is ungrammatical and confusing. The corrected sentence uses past tense and clearer structure.

× I know about growing planes not too much because I just wrote some kind of brand which so easy to grow such as vegetables or flower.

✓ I don't know much about growing plants because I just wrote down some kinds of brands which are easy to grow, such as vegetables or flowers.

The student confused 'planes' with 'plants'. Also, 'wrote' is likely a mistranslation or misuse; 'wrote down' is more appropriate. 'Brand' should be plural 'brands' or 'types'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'.

× So I know about a month and 1/4.

✓ So I have known about it for about a month and a quarter.

The sentence is unclear and uses present tense 'know' incorrectly to express duration. The present perfect tense 'have known' is appropriate to indicate knowledge over a period.

× Yes, I think so. I don't know too much about Chinese culture, but in Vietnam we give some plants of flour, like a gift.

✓ Yes, I think so. I don't know too much about Chinese culture, but in Vietnam we give some plants or flowers as gifts.

'Plants of flour' is incorrect; likely meant 'plants or flowers'. Also, 'like a gift' should be 'as gifts' to express the purpose.

× For example, in the new house celebrates, they give some plants relative.

✓ For example, during new house celebrations, they give some plants to relatives.

The phrase 'in the new house celebrates' is ungrammatical; 'during new house celebrations' is correct. 'Plants relative' is unclear; likely meant 'plants to relatives'.