Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了感情，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“Dezer the Rose”应为“desert rose”，“plan”应为“plant”，“sink into it”表达不清晰。建议注意单词拼写和搭配，避免语法错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I keep a desert rose at home. It is like a little friend that keeps me company. I often talk to it because I find it relaxing. Its beautiful flowers also brighten up my room.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“plans”应为“plants”，“my mother like plants”应为“my mother liked plants”。句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子表达观点。

例: To be honest, I didn't grow any plants when I was young. However, my mother liked many beautiful flowers such as roses and tulips.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“didn't know many”应为“didn't know much”，“cue the plants”不正确。建议学习正确的表达方式，避免语法错误，回答时保持简洁明了。

例: I would like to say I know a little about growing plants, but honestly, I didn't learn much when I was young.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“trends”应为“plants”，“have”应为“has”，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，使用完整句子，并提供具体例子。

例: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts to friends or family. For example, if someone owns a shop, their friends might give them a money tree as a gift.

× Yes, I keep a Dezer the Rose at home.

✓ Yes, I keep a Dezer the Rose at home.

此句中“a Dezer the Rose”看似是专有名词，未发现单复数错误。无需修改。

× It's not just a plan to me but like a little friend that always keeps me company.

✓ It's not just a plant to me but like a little friend that always keeps me company.

单词“plan”应为“plant”，表示“植物”，这是拼写错误，属于形容词/副词使用错误范畴。

× I talk and sink into it almost every day because I find it very relaxing and it brightens me up my room with its beautiful flowers.

✓ I talk and sink into it almost every day because I find it very relaxing and it brightens up my room with its beautiful flowers.

短语“brightens me up my room”中“me”多余，应去掉，正确表达为“brightens up my room”。

× To be honest, I didn't have any plans to grow when I was young, but my mother like plants many beautiful flowers such as rose, tulips and so on.

✓ To be honest, I didn't have any plants to grow when I was young, but my mother liked plants with many beautiful flowers such as roses, tulips and so on.

“plans”应为“plants”，表示“植物”；“like”应为过去式“liked”；“rose”应为复数“roses”，因为列举多种花。

× but my mother like plants many beautiful flowers such as rose, tulips and so on.

✓ but my mother liked plants with many beautiful flowers such as roses, tulips and so on.

描述过去时，动词“like”应使用过去式“liked”。

× I'd like to say I know something about that, but to be honest, I didn't know many about growing a plant.

✓ I'd like to say I know something about that, but to be honest, I don't know much about growing plants.

表达现在事实时，应使用现在时“don't know”；“many”用于可数名词复数，植物应用“much”或“many plants”。

× I didn't know many about growing a plant.

✓ I didn't know much about growing plants.

“many”用于可数名词复数，前文“a plant”应改为复数“plants”，且“much”更适合不可数名词“knowledge”。

× I have, uh, cue the plants when I were was young, so I didn't know.

✓ I have, uh, cared for the plants when I was young, so I didn't know.

“cue”应为“cared for”，表示照顾；“were was”错误，应为“was”，主语“I”对应单数过去式。

× I have, uh, cue the plants when I were was young, so I didn't know.

✓ I have, uh, cared for the plants when I was young, so I didn't know.

“were was”是时态错误，第一人称单数过去式应为“was”。

× Oh yes, Chinese people usually send trends as gifts to their friends or families.

✓ Oh yes, Chinese people usually send plants as gifts to their friends or families.

“trends”应为“plants”，语境中指“植物”，属于单复数错误。

× For example, if one person have a shop or company, his friends may send him a FAI Tai Shu to.

✓ For example, if one person has a shop or company, his friends may send him a FAI Tai Shu too.

“have”应为第三人称单数“has”；“to”应为“too”，表示“也”。