Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免重复表达，如“plant”应为复数形式“plants”，并注意连贯性。可以简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I don't keep plants at home because I live in a small apartment with a limited balcony, and I find it hard to take care of them due to my busy schedule.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。应直接回答问题，使用正确的单复数形式，并提供具体植物名称。

例: When I was young, I used to grow tulips because they are common and easy to care for, so many children choose them as their first plants.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，如“need a bit about it”应为“know a bit about it”，并注意句子连贯。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词。

例: Yes, I know a bit about growing plants. For example, you need to ensure the environment suits the plant, water it regularly, and apply fertilizer to help it grow better.

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多。应直接回答问题，避免重复，使用更准确的表达，如“children”而非“a children”，并注意逻辑连贯。

例: No, I think it's uncommon in China because many people, especially children, lack the knowledge and space to care for plants, especially in cities.

× No. No, I don't keep plant at home because balconies are very limited and highly valued in modern city.

✓ No. No, I don't keep plants at home because balconies are very limited and highly valued in modern city.

plant是可数名词，表示植物，单数形式表示一株植物，复数形式plants表示多株植物。这里表达的是一般情况，应该用复数形式plants。

× Since I live in a small apt I don't have enough space to plant the plant and beside I find it difficult to take care of them with my busy schedule.

✓ Since I live in a small apt I don't have enough space to plant plants and besides I find it difficult to take care of them with my busy schedule.

plant应使用复数形式plants，表示多株植物。beside应为besides，表示“此外”。

× If I remember correctly, I used to grow some roots because you know, it's a very common flowers in our daily life.

✓ If I remember correctly, I used to grow some roots because you know, they're very common flowers in our daily life.

flowers是复数，前面的it is应改为they are，主谓一致。

× If I remember correctly, I used to grow some roots because you know, it's a very common flowers in our daily life.

✓ If I remember correctly, I used to grow some roots because you know, they're very common flowers in our daily life.

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用第三人称复数形式are，而不是第三人称单数is。

× So I think everyone will choose it too as first plants at home.

✓ So I think everyone will choose them too as first plants at home.

plants是复数，指多株植物，代词it应改为them，保持数的一致。

× Yes, I need a bit about it.

✓ Yes, I need to know a bit about it.

动词need后面应接不定式to do sth，不能直接接名词a bit。

× For example, you need to make sure your thought situation is suit for your plant and secondly you need to know how often you need to watering your plants.

✓ For example, you need to make sure your thought situation is suitable for your plant and secondly you need to know how often you need to water your plants.

suit是动词，形容词应为suitable。动词need后接动词原形water，不能用动名词watering。

× What's more, you need to put some fertilizer for your plant to make sure they can grow better.

✓ What's more, you need to put some fertilizer on your plant to make sure it can grow better.

fertilizer后应接介词on表示“施肥于”，plant是单数，代词应为it。

× No, I think it's very little in our country because as a children we don't have ability and we don't have enough knowledge to care of a plant.

✓ No, I think it's very rare in our country because as children we don't have ability and we don't have enough knowledge to take care of a plant.

children是复数，前面不加冠词a。care of是固定搭配，前面应加动词take。

× No, I think it's very little in our country because as a children we don't have ability and we don't have enough knowledge to care of a plant.

✓ No, I think it's very little in our country because as children we don't have ability and we don't have enough knowledge to take care of a plant.

care of是固定搭配，前面应加动词take。

× What more we live in city, we don't have enough space to grow the plants.

✓ What's more, we live in the city, we don't have enough space to grow plants.

plants用复数表示植物的复数。city前应加定冠词the。What's more是固定表达。